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0 posted 2001-03-24 11:30 PM


Define LOVE
L-Listening to what your mate has to say it makes them feel important everyday.

O-Occuping thier time to tell them how you feel if they get L then they already know the deal

V-V is for Very-when they Listen, you Occupy their time telling them their a Very sweet person and a Very good friend.

E-E is Everything that you ever done to make them happy, bring a smile to thier face after they feel crappy.

Whatever you please follow these rules and remember what LOVE is and all it does.

What ever happens so let it happen unlees you don't want it to happen.

© Copyright 2001 Jamie - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-03-24 11:35 PM


I know i have been gone for a long time , sorry. Stay strong

What ever happens so let it happen unlees you don't want it to happen.

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2 posted 2001-03-25 12:01 PM


I liked this, it was so sweet. Sometimes we don't honestly think this is one hundered percent true, but it's a very good idea.
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3 posted 2001-03-25 02:25 AM


Ah love...opener of eyes and stabber of knifes...wait, i think i already said that...hehe

To define Love ...an interesting avenue of presuit, though well handled and navigated...errr, that means "cool" hehe.

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4 posted 2001-03-25 01:37 PM


This is a very good piece. Defining love in any way is indeed a challenge, and you did very well here. Nice job.

--Marie

I never thought that you would ever be the one to let me down. I guess that just goes to show how wrong I always am.

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5 posted 2001-03-25 06:25 PM


Very nice, thanks for the tips!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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6 posted 2001-04-02 03:52 PM


I'll make sure I'd follow your guidelines  

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

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7 posted 2001-04-03 10:57 PM


This is all very true and very important in relationships =o) Very cute acrostic!!!
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8 posted 2001-04-04 11:20 PM


Thanks for all the comments I really appreciate it.

What ever happens so let it happen unlees you don't want it to happen.

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