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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada 
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hey.....this is one of my older poems i posted in ten poetry 3#....suits my mood lately...... Only angels will be brought down to hell, they are cursed with the gift of being kind souls The scream of another breaking bell signify truth and love gone blind The hate and sadness which devours us will never melt away nothing will remain in our angry world I see closeby, love is trying to take form I reached out for it and love breaks before my very eyes. Rage has destroyed what beautiful crushed all good intention cruelty has become plentiful evil, flaws ruin every dimension We are born into this world as angels and die in a world of rage falling from the sky we sail to paradise in the night, another lost soul that love can't buy back In The light there are no detailed shadows, light slowly fades into darkness, we are all hostile strangers in the light all waitng to die, hoping with all our might. The darkness is welcome because I will now have an eternity to rest. I do not want to be a part of this world,this nightmare No,itsn't painless-I just can't feel it anymore. It's has been devouring me for so long I do not care anymore. In fact, I don't even know it's thereanymore. I close the drawer. i welcome death in all its forms. I am scared in a castle full of roses that i ask again and again to leave..... I ask give me rainy dreams until they fade me away I'm crying for rainy dreams, rainy roses that will save from ths tasteless life. Regina |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
We all have times when we see the world this way. You describe the sadness and terror of this place with great detail... you just left out all of the beautiful things about life. I just hope you haven't forgotten about them. Anyway, thanks for the re-post. "Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nicely done here Tamma. I liked thispoem a lot and thanks for re-posting it.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Wow Regina...yeh..I seem to have a vague memory of this one...I really do love your style, you can pretty much write whatever's on your mind and it turns out so well.....I hope things look up for you, girl...you deserve to be happy... ~Carly "The eye sees a thing more clearly in dreams than the imagination awake." |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
First of all, Dopey ---who's tamma?  You've expressed yourself in such sad ways. Unfortunately, the world can be cruel and a hard place to live in. But life is all not that bad. We just have to learn to love and be greatful for what we have, and at the same time look into the good things more. Hope things are better with you Ina "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
Thank you for re-posting this beautiful piece since i haven't been around long enough for me to have read it the first time. The emotion in this poem is splendid and the wording is excellent. i hope things start looking up in the near future. Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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Linc
since 2001-03-07
Posts 552The Backstreet Boy |
Hey, This is a great poem I must have missed it from teen poetry 3  I love it keep it up. Until your next poem-- Linc "Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment." |
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