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0 posted 2001-03-24 01:04 AM


hi every1 jus wanted some suggestions frum ma fellow poets think ya'll can think of sumthing 2 fit ma poem..... ok i wrote a poem but i realized wat i wrote was similar 2 the verse robert frost wrote.."and nothing to look backward with pride,/and nothing to look forward with hope..."
but thats how i exactly feel i tired to put it in ma way but i jus can't find the right one but
note: that verse is how i truly felt at the moment i wrote it so can ya'll pplz take the time 2 help and give some suggestions
thanks i appreciate those u help me with this
poem which i wrote couple of more verses but need those 2 more verses 2 make the poem a full expressed


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1 posted 2001-03-24 02:11 AM


Sorry, but double posting is against the guidelines of Passions in Poetry...hope you understand

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So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

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