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jytree
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0 posted 2001-03-23 11:28 PM


I want to say I love you but I am scared,
For all the walls crashing down leaving me bear,
The price of love equels the price of death,
So I plunge in first with no regrets,

Walking alone in the empty street,
All I can do is stare and watch how things are so neat,
Watching how love blossems and blooms,
Only to end up dead and doomed,

Maybe it is not the same with every life,
But how should I tell with the lonely feeling the beckons tonight,
I never forgot a kiss or even a simple touch,
But that doesn't matter any more,

Wearing a mask to hide my pain,
Only opening up to one person before I go insane,
Waiting for me chance to be freeded by love,
But until then I am just like a used glove.

Lead me not into temptation,
I can find the way there mysel



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1 posted 2001-03-24 01:07 PM


Good job on this one, Jay. I could see what you were saying quite clearly. You ended it very well, wrapped it all up perfectly.
~Allan

If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort


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2 posted 2001-03-24 10:44 PM


This is truely something to admire. The serenity of love and often lead to disputes in reality.

My head or my heart. A dificult choice.

jytree
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3 posted 2001-03-25 12:24 PM


I just thought I would tell everyone how I feel lately about love it just feels that I can only look at others and just sit in my corner it gets old very quickly some days

Lead me not into temptation,
I can find the way there mysel



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4 posted 2001-03-25 08:04 AM


Observation of love can be exceedingly depressing, although you describe these observations well. Although love may bloom and fade, don't forget that it DOES bloom. Thanks for sharing.

"Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli

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5 posted 2001-03-25 12:56 PM


i can relate to what your saying VERY well. I just got out of a relationship and i feel this way but even in the relationship i felt this way too. Keep your chin up. Things happen for the best...
Valerie

*Life can take your dreams and turn them upside down, Friends will talk about you when you're not around, but don't ever lose that light in your eyes*

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6 posted 2001-03-25 02:12 PM


Nicely done here jytree. I thought you wrote this well!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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7 posted 2001-04-01 06:03 PM


When we show our love for someone doesn't it feel like we're gambling our feelings?  Scarry ain't it.  But we'll never know if it's mutual if we dont express it.

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

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