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fozzyozzy
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since 2001-03-15

Posts 336
Lessburg Virginia

0 posted 2001-03-23 10:39 PM

Silent Serenity

What can you hear
When the world turns deaf
Serenity
A sweet silence
For my piece of mind
It hurts too much to see you
It hurts too much to scream
But take a breath
Sigh
I'll let my thoughts roam
Imagine myself in a coma
To transcend like Emerson
Yet not transparent eye can see
Appreciate the silence to be
Inspired
Hesitant for a breath
Sigh
I cannot disturb
What is stronger than me
This sweet silent serenity.

"The heart can think of no devotion
Greater than being shore to ocean
Holding the curve of one position
Counting an endless repetition"
-

Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

1 posted 2001-03-24 10:29 AM

Wow, 0 posts on page 2? This poem is great! The style is perfect. Nice job yet again!

--Marie

I never thought that you would ever be the one to let me down. I guess that just goes to show how wrong I always am.

Allan Riverwood

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since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

2 posted 2001-03-24 01:36 PM

It was ok. Mediocre for you, man. Doesn't it suck being amazing?

I know how it is to hear "not your best," but just let it serve to reinforce the ones that I did like.
So to this I say
Not your best!

~Allan

If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

3 posted 2001-03-24 06:08 PM

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[This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 03-25-2001).]

Allan Riverwood

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since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

4 posted 2001-03-25 11:16 AM

On the other hand, Albert makes a valid argument.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

5 posted 2001-03-25 03:38 PM

Great poem fozzy. I liked this one a lot!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

6 posted 2001-04-01 06:42 PM

Not your best that I've read, but still an amazing read. thanks for sharing

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

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