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princess^sarah
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since 2001-01-12

Posts 131
melbourne

0 posted 2001-03-23 08:08 PM

tonights the night out love will grow
weve got all the time,lets take it slow
deep inside my heart you'll find a key
to discover the secrets within me.

for you know that my love is true
and all that i think of is you
for all the moments we have shared
i have treasured every moment
beyond compare.

our love stands great and tall
cos love is the power
greatest of all.

Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

1 posted 2001-03-23 08:22 PM

"deep inside my heart you'll find a key
to discover the secrets within me."
This is a really well-written poem. It's beautiful, and sweet! I think maybe you should give this to the person you wrote it about? Just a suggestion

Also, a reminder... this is your third poem for the day. Be careful, you wouldn't them closed for posting more than 3

Great job on the poem.

--Marie

I never thought that you would ever be the one to let me down. I guess that just goes to show how wrong I always am.

princess^sarah
Member

since 2001-01-12

Posts 131
melbourne

2 posted 2001-03-23 08:57 PM

i cant give it to him... its a certain someone that submits poems in here and he doesnt love me anymore so im too scared to give it to him

luvnkris
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since 2000-08-31

Posts 144
Perth, Australia

3 posted 2001-03-23 10:16 PM

this was a lovely poem!
i bet if u gave it to him he couldn't help but love you! its gorgeous!
Luv Jo
xoxo

* never live a second without being grateful for all you have around you*

princess^sarah
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since 2001-01-12

Posts 131
melbourne

4 posted 2001-03-23 11:01 PM

i cant

[This message has been edited by princess^sarah (edited 03-24-2001).]

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

5 posted 2001-03-23 11:56 PM

ur poems r really great today

princess^sarah
Member

since 2001-01-12

Posts 131
melbourne

6 posted 2001-03-24 03:17 AM

its about tom gorman
my b/f
who i love dearly

[This message has been edited by princess^sarah (edited 03-24-2001).]

AngelShell
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since 2000-03-01

Posts 446
not heaven nor hell so...

7 posted 2001-03-24 06:57 AM

You're just a sonnet waiting to happen.

Very real.

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

8 posted 2001-03-24 11:08 AM

The ending of this was really great, nice job on the poem!

"Be kind, for everyone you meet is fighting a hard battle"
"Life's short. If you don't look around once in a while you might miss it."
BothUnknown

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

9 posted 2001-03-25 02:10 PM

Nicely done here. I agree with your perception on just how powerful love truly is.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

10 posted 2001-04-01 06:00 PM

Wonderful post, I think youve shown really how much you do care for this person. keep it up and keep sharing

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

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