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katherine
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since 2000-06-10

Posts 365
Canberra Australia

0 posted 2001-03-23 06:30 AM

I don't know what to do.
I don't know what i ca do.
I neally colapased telling you,
all that i'd been through.
I didn't even tell you half.
This is a really hard time.
He just made it worse.
He's not here to make them worse he's here to make them better i guess i've just gone to far. He doesn't want the job any more. The thing is i need him to have that job because with out him...................

I'll just colapse in a pille of tears.

Allan Riverwood

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since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

1 posted 2001-03-23 11:45 AM

Good job on this one, Katherine. I certainly do hope you are alright.
Next time I see you on ICQ, we'll talk ok?
Keep your chin up, hon.
~Allan

If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

2 posted 2001-03-23 12:25 PM

Aww... I'm sorry that things aren't going so great for you. But keep smiling, and I hope things get better.
As for the poem, very nice job. I liked this!

--Marie

I never thought that you would ever be the one to let me down. I guess that just goes to show how wrong I always am.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-03-23 02:36 PM

Sorry that this is going on. Your spelling isn't too good in this poem and it kind of disrrupts (I'm not too good at spelling either) the flow of it all.
Nice poem though.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Child of the Stars

Senior Member

since 2000-09-07

Posts 1658
Ann Arbor, MI

4 posted 2001-03-23 04:20 PM

One 'r' in disrupts, Javi. Hehe..well really great poem...I specially liked the line that stood apart, kinda left a "bam" on the reaction..nice work...
~Carly

"The eye sees a thing more clearly in dreams than the imagination awake."
- Leonardo da Vinci

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

5 posted 2001-03-30 04:18 PM

First of all, you shouldn't make him feel like it's a job

Secondly, you should stay strong whatever happens
keep sharing
thanks for the read

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

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