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starryeyed999
Junior Member

since 2001-03-05

Posts 35

0 posted 2001-03-22 01:52 AM

Eyes Like twinking stars
Deep in the night
I fall into a trance
At the first sight.

I remember how good you looked.
And how my world shook when I saw you.
Oh, how I wanted your body.

Somethings are too good to be true,
Because when I got to know you,
That perfect idea of you I had,
Was completely shattered.

<*Lacy*>
"I can only please one person a day. Today is not your day. Tomorrow doesn't look good either. I'll get back to you."

[This message has been edited by starryeyed999 (edited 03-23-2001).]

Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

1 posted 2001-03-22 07:33 AM

This is an important experience to be had, isn't it?
Some people have looks, sure. But the ugly people tend to be the kindest, because we have learned compassion. I'm not saying there are no nice beautiful people, of course there are.
But in my experience, the most approachable are the physically unattractive.
You reminded me of something that happened to me that was very similar to this, at a young age.
Thanks... it's always good to remember these things.
See you around.
~Allan

If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

2 posted 2001-03-22 09:17 AM

I like the imagery, but this isn't my favorite from you. Looks aren't all there is to a person. Remember that.

--Marie

I never thought that you would ever be the one to let me down. I guess that just goes to show how wrong I always am.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-03-23 03:42 AM

Very well done. I liked this quite a bit.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

4 posted 2001-03-30 02:36 PM

It's always in the inside that matters and not only what we see outside. I'm not gonna say that the outside doesn't matter, cause it does matter too. But the inside is what matters most.

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

LoveBug

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Member Elite

since 2000-01-08

Posts 4697

5 posted 2001-03-30 03:59 PM

I know what it's like to fall for a good-looking guy who turns out to be a jerk. It's strange that the "beautiful people" seem to lack the true beauty that so few possess. You describe this well. Thanks for sharing.

"Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli

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