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fozzyozzy
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since 2001-03-15

Posts 336
Lessburg Virginia

0 posted 2001-03-21 09:57 PM

Droplets of Dew

Sparklets of water dropped at nigh sight
Dizziness cast upon such a stormy night
Shining like glass possessed
Into a sidewalk river caressed
Icy wind blasts with unnatural turmor
Until God silenced resonates only a murmor
Sprinkled droplets upon a fresh grass
Given tonight things soon past
Objects of dew and love never last.

"The heart can think of no devotion
Greater than being shore to ocean
Holding the curve of one position
Counting an endless repetition"
-

Allan Riverwood

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since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

1 posted 2001-03-21 10:34 PM

Ah... quite a good poem. Had a lot of very good descriptions.
A fine example of your talent, Ozzy.
~Allan

If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2001-03-21 11:19 PM

Very nice poem. I think this is my fav from you today.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

3 posted 2001-03-22 09:03 AM

I liked this a lot. Allan and Dopey said what I would have wanted to, so to avoid the risk of sounded repetitive, I'll just say this is very nicely written. Good job

--Marie

I never thought that you would ever be the one to let me down. I guess that just goes to show how wrong I always am.

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

4 posted 2001-03-29 06:39 PM

I thought this was written really good
im actually really impressed with this one
you've outdone yourself
keep it up

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

Deranger
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since 2000-05-10

Posts 498
Somewhere, between here and there

5 posted 2001-03-29 06:50 PM

Shining like glass possessed

Excellant line!

Spreading insanity, one post at a time

My skull has glowing green eyes

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