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starryeyed999
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0 posted 2001-03-21 01:27 AM



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"I can only please one person a day. Today is not your day. Tomorrow doesn't look good either. I'll get back to you."

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1 posted 2001-03-21 01:33 PM


I sense a lot of jealousy within this poem. I am guessing that you wrote this to vent out a bit of what you were feeling. I know it hurts to lose somebody you love, I've been there. I hope everything gets well for you. Good luck!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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