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fozzyozzy
Member

since 2001-03-15

Posts 336
Lessburg Virginia

0 posted 2001-03-20 09:41 PM

Frost on a Tree

Captured so suddenly at night
Branches unmoving left no fight
Icy cage wrapped round oak wood
Slivering skin set such a mood

Frost a gift for nature and me
Brilliant composure simply
Craftsman still unchallenged in skill
Written New Hampshire on a hill

Frost how dost thou describe this tree
Frost ever so elagantly
There is no snowy evening
But gentle dew in the morning

Greatest scribe deemed deceased
He left with us a poetry feast
Wood, fire, and ice are his muses
Nature left to our abuses.

"The heart can think of no devotion
Greater than being shore to ocean
Holding the curve of one position
Counting an endless repetition"
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StarPryncess17
Senior Member

since 2000-05-31

Posts 932
Colorado

1 posted 2001-03-20 09:47 PM

WOW, I THINK THAT YOUR WORK IS QUICKLY BECOMING MORE AND MORE APPEALING TO ME. YOU'RE SO DESCRIPTIVE CREATING BEAUTIFUL IMAGERY AND WONDERFUL SENTIMENTS. THANKS SO MUCH FOR SHARING...AND I ALSO LIKE YOUR RANDOM USE OF SLANT RHYME. ~*~JESILYN~*~

"Tell me why you cry"

[This message has been edited by StarPryncess17 (edited 03-20-2001).]

Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

2 posted 2001-03-20 11:02 PM

Frost was a cool dude. (no pun intended.

)
Nice tribute.
~Allan

If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-03-21 01:31 PM

I don't much like frost.....
Anyhow, I think you did this poem VERY well. I've said it before and I'll say it again, you have talent!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

4 posted 2001-03-22 09:29 AM

Beautiful imagery! I liked this a lot... very nicely done!

--Marie

I never thought that you would ever be the one to let me down. I guess that just goes to show how wrong I always am.

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

5 posted 2001-03-30 02:29 PM

That was wonderful
I'm totally in awe
BRAVO!!!!

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

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