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Tamma
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In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV

0 posted 2001-03-20 06:46 PM


I heard that you want me back
You think you made a mistake?
But I’m gone . . . nowhere to be found
I’ve moved, far, far outta town
I told you before to think before you ended it
Because “once I’m gone, I’m gone for good”
You didn’t believe a word I told you
You thought you would have me again
But I guess you thought wrong
Cause I’m “Out of sight”
When I should be “Out of mind”

Am I getting on your nerves yet? If I am, I Sowwy. Every poem I post here, is also put on my website Along with the "full story, and what "" really is...Sorry Dopey, I can't hold the title in much longer : Welcome to the Town of "",Texas


i dont know if i should cry because its over, or smile because it happened

[This message has been edited by Tamma (edited 03-20-2001).]

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keoni
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Up in the mountains in the NFC
1 posted 2001-03-20 06:55 PM


Tamma, Nice poem. Although I don't think it's your best, still very good work. The last two lines were hella cool.
"Cause I’m “Out of sight”
When I should be “Out of mind”"
Great Job.
Jon

"Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine

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2 posted 2001-03-20 11:34 PM


I guess as long as it's not on here it's ok.
Good series tamma!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Allysa
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3 posted 2001-03-21 08:08 AM


This is great. I can't think of anything else to say.

I wish people would stop telling me that I can do anything I want to. I never thought that I couldn't.

Life is what happens when you're making ot

Acies
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4 posted 2001-03-28 06:28 PM


waiting for the next......

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

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