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An Unexpected Facade.

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Marshalzu
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0 posted 03-19-2001 05:11 PM       View Profile for Marshalzu   Email Marshalzu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Marshalzu's Home Page   View IP for Marshalzu


An unexpected Facade.

On the inside he is fragile,
On the outside he is strong,
He looks so very agile,
Walks like nothing could go wrong,
But he always insecure,
And heís feeling paranoid,
He wants a love thats pure,
But itís pain he must avoid,
They say that heís a hero,
He thinks that is unfair,
Nothing but a zero,
Drowning in dispair,
Nothings really wrong with him,
Itís only his self doubt,
He seeís the futures grim,
So he just goes and lets it out.

Love is a friendship caught on fire.

© Copyright 2001 Andrew Sewell - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 03-19-2001 08:09 PM       View Profile for Linc   Email Linc   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Linc

Hey,

WOW, no replies. Well this is a really good I though. Oh well I am happy to be the first to repile. Keep it up this is great

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2 posted 03-19-2001 09:45 PM       View Profile for Dopey Dope   Email Dopey Dope   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dopey Dope

I think this poem could be related to the killings in the highschools that have happening lately. This provoked some serious thoughts in my head. I thought you wrote this nicely.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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3 posted 03-20-2001 10:00 AM       View Profile for Fading Away   Email Fading Away   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Fading Away

Great poem! I love your work, and I can't wait to read what's next... I agree with Dopes, this does make me think of the shootings that's been going on lately. Nice poem.

--Marie

I never thought that you would ever be the one to let me down. I guess that just goes to show how wrong I always am.

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4 posted 03-20-2001 10:04 PM       View Profile for Allan Riverwood   Email Allan Riverwood   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Allan Riverwood

I was thinking what Javier was... seems like it could be related to the shootings.
Great job.
~Allan

If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort

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5 posted 03-26-2001 07:33 PM       View Profile for Acies   Email Acies   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Acies

hmmmmm
interesting
let's just hope that isnt it

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So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

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6 posted 03-22-2002 05:36 PM       View Profile for skyshine   Email skyshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit skyshine's Home Page   View IP for skyshine

I like this one a lot, because it reminds me so much of someone I care about. He had me fooled for the longest time, but I'm beginning to realize that he isn't who he seems to be. Great work, Marshalzu.

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