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Hallucination
Member

since 2001-03-18

Posts 419

0 posted 2001-03-18 07:18 PM

A raindrop is rolling down my face,
feels like being lost in your sweet embrace.
One look into your eyes and I can see,
a flame burning, burning for me

You're my rainbow out across the night,
in a storm with thunder you're my candle light.
When I hear your voice I start to tremble,
brings back things, things I resemble

Love is a chapter
the most romantic, the prettiest of them all.
Red roses, beautiful words in poems,
perfect tears, melting hearts and so on.
It feels like flying in a dream,
All the time.

Our memories all I will treasure,
your lips against mine's more than a pleasure.
Every time I touch you I can feel,
a glow glowing, glowing inside me.

In the past love has always been there,
in the future love will always be here.
But for how long will it stay,
a month, a year, or just another day.

Love is a chapter
the most romantic, the prettiest of them all.
Red roses, beautiful words in poems,
perfect tears, melting hearts and so on.
It feels like flying in a dream,
All the time.

fozzyozzy
Member

since 2001-03-15

Posts 336
Lessburg Virginia

1 posted 2001-03-18 09:42 PM

Whoa!!! This is amazing! You are an incredibly skilled poet. Welcome. This is one of the best poems I've seen here. Fantastic work.

"The woods are lovely, dark, and deep
But I have promises to keep
And miles to go before I sleep
And miles to go before I sleep"
-Robert Frost

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

2 posted 2001-03-19 10:12 AM

This is a wonderful poem! This one's going in my library. I agree with fozzyozzy, you are a very skilled poet

Good job.

--Marie

I never thought that you would ever be the one to let me down. I guess that just goes to show how wrong I always am.

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-03-19 11:53 AM

What a beautiful poem! I truly enjoyed this one by you. One of the best so far.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Elvenblood
Member

since 2001-02-17

Posts 409
Maine, USA

4 posted 2001-03-19 04:56 PM

Wow, I've said all there is to say! Wow, I was right, I love all your work! Don't post more then 3 in one day though. But keep posting none the less!

"Some men see things as they are and say why.
I dream things that never were and say why not." ~RFK

[This message has been edited by acire (edited 03-25-2001).]

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

5 posted 2001-03-25 05:23 PM

Wow!!!
I love it and right now I'm pretty much speechless
~*applauds*~
keep posting

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

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