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Tamma
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0 posted 2001-03-18 05:05 PM



When I see you I get all excited
But then I see him and I get sad
I do pretty ok when I don’t see him
I just don’t know how to explain it
When I get a hug from you it makes me so happy
One hug from you keeps me from getting mad
I think of you when I feel awful
And it makes me feel better
I guess what I’m trying to say is I like you

i dont know if i should cry because its over, or smile because it happened

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1 posted 2001-03-18 05:34 PM


Hey Tamma, this is cute, but you have WAY too much spare time!

"Some men see things as they are and say why.
I dream things that never were and say why not." ~RFK

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2 posted 2001-03-18 05:38 PM


Gotta luv da smileys.
~C

"The eye sees a thing more clearly in dreams than the imagination awake."
- Leonardo da Vinci

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3 posted 2001-03-18 05:59 PM


Haha, very cute tamma.....
VERY!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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4 posted 2001-03-18 06:14 PM


OMG!! this is way past cute it's adorable!!!! i've done worse when i've had spare time so i'd say this tops it all though!! hehehe i love it!!


Valerie

*Life can take your dreams and turn them upside down, Friends will talk about you when you're not around, but don't ever lose that light in your eyes*

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5 posted 2001-03-23 07:27 PM


The smileys was a great addition to the poem
ok, let me go more poems and do my job

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

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6 posted 2001-03-23 07:56 PM


Aww.. that was cute! Very creative Good job.

--Marie

I never thought that you would ever be the one to let me down. I guess that just goes to show how wrong I always am.

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