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Ski*Chick Member
since 2001-01-13
Posts 141Fitchburg, Mass, Usa |
It doesn't matter who is your friend nor does it matter what you and your friends like you don't have to like everything about them. But then there's some "groups" who think their all that, when their not They think we are the top of the world. Then one day a new person walks threw the doors no one wants to be their friend so he/she starts telling people things. Soon that shy person is killing others because no one paid any attention to them because he/she was so shy or different. Just think about that kid that no one wanted to talk to then he shot peers All because of one thing is "groups" so the next time you step into some where new Think of the kid who no one liked because he was shy Minna |
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Elvenblood Member
since 2001-02-17
Posts 409Maine, USA |
Oh I love this. The message is powerful, and the emotion in it strong, seems almost deperate. I absolutely love this, and it's goinginto my library. Because I'm usually that one people don't like, but I'm stable, don't worry Val ;-) "Some men see things as they are and say why. |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
The message was indeed powerful... I am quite aware of the "class system" in schools these days. and I am proud to be a part of a smaller group, in which we allow one another great individuality. As a result, we are not as close as some groups appear to be, but it allows a great deal of independence.  We had a shy new kid just awhile ago. So we talked to him, and it just so happens he's quite a bit like us. Now he's probably one of my closest friends out of all of them. So yeah, talk to the shy kids. You never know.  ~Allan If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I think that this post talks about something that is quite important in news right now. It's such a tragedy that situations like this are occurring all around the world. I surely hope we can all learn from this and better ourselves for the future.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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~sugarpie313~ Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 375Maine, USA |
This poem was very good. i hope everyone reads this.... we have a kid like this in our school. he wasn't very liked by anyone, then he made some threats and it's scary.... no bryan i'm not talking about you either LOL but great job on the poem. i like it a lot. Valerie *Life can take your dreams and turn them upside down, Friends will talk about you when you're not around, but don't ever lose that light in your eyes* |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
I think it's terrible that kids can be ostracized so much that this is what happens. It's horrible being a kid nowadays. And as far as cliques go... they do fill a void, some people need a group to feel accepted, and it is nice to feel part of something. But then they exclude others, and that's where the nonsense begins. Great idea to post this... I hope people understand that no matter what killing others is not the answer. Jenn "I'm a big, big, girl, in a big, big world, it's not a big, big thing if you leave me, but I do feel, that I will miss you much..." Emilia |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
You have shared a beautiful message to everyone. And I'll agree with it 100 percent no more cliques  "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
This is a beautiful poem, with a very good message. More people need to think like this. If they did, I think this world would be so much better. Very good poem! Nicely written. --Marie |
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Ski*Chick Member
since 2001-01-13
Posts 141Fitchburg, Mass, Usa |
I wrote a story called The Best of Friends for my friend Kelly. She loves *N sync but I really don't care who is her favorite band. She's in  with Justin Timberlake, and this hockey player, I think it's cool. If you'd like to see my story email me and I can send it to you. Bye for now  Min |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Yup, you told of this very well, good job. "Be kind, for everyone you meet is fighting a hard battle" |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
strong [This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 03-25-2001).] |
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