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So Lonely
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So Lonely |
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fozzyozzy Member
since 2001-03-15
Posts 336Lessburg Virginia 
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I just thought this up. Hope you like it. ---------------------------------- So Lonely So much I wanted to do To kiss, caress, and hold you But I never had the chance You'll always leave my dance It's too hard to imagine now You gazing into my eyes somehow There is a smoke screen before my eyes Why did you have to lead me on with your lies? Am I in denial some other way? Can love make me blind every day? I love you for touching me I hate you for blinding me My imagination stops at a line I can't picture you as mine Another photograph another time Why punishment? What is my crime So lovely lady Leigh Have you said your Farewells to me? Or grind it into my soul Allow me lick my wounds And make myself once again whole You read me a poem of your little game Hearing heartache and feeling it Will never ever be the same I don't know if I can be your friend I thought what we had was better I thought what we had would never end O' brine soaked tempermant Tell me of things to be And lovers to meet Aphrodite I may greet? Straight answers are what I seek! Introduction to Romeo and Juliet to peek At what lovers should be How you were not that way with me! With so many direct lines and brushes You painted me a circle Never-ending always beginning circle Damned circle why?! Were you out to make me cry?! I don't even know why I still care for your lie So much I wanted to do To kiss, caress, and hold you But I never had the chance You'll always leave my dance. ----------------------------------- I needed to vent. |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
You vented well. The biproduct is a nice one, thanks for posting it.  ~Allan If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
hey great job here~ I really liked it. ITs always good to have a way to vent. keep posting or should i say venting  *dq ¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤ |
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Marshalzu 
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
I liked your venting it was very creative and I enjoyed loads... keep on posting. Zu Love is a friendship caught on fire. |
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Elvenblood Member
since 2001-02-17
Posts 409Maine, USA |
Ohhh, that's a very very very good piece there!! :-) I absolutely love this, and it;s also going into my library! "Some men see things as they are and say why. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I liked it. Well done at venting. I thought it was a good poem.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Wow! This is an amazing poem! You did an awesome job here. It's going straight to my library... VERY well done! --Marie I never thought that you would ever be the one to let me down. I guess that just goes to show how wrong I always am. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
This is a really good poem. You've done well my friend. keep posting "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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luvnkris Member
since 2000-08-31
Posts 144Perth, Australia |
nice poem i realli enjoyed it! Luv Jo xoxo * never live a second without being grateful for all you have around you* |
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