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sweetstuff101
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since 2000-07-27
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OK, USA

0 posted 2001-03-16 11:02 PM


Hey u guyz!! I am back!!! I hope for a lot longer than I was last time!! I have just had so much to do resently!! But I am happy to say that it is finally Sping Break!!!!!!!! (u have no idea how happy I am)
Yeah I know this poem stinx....but I wrote it real quick...

Lotsa Luv,
~*~Priscilla~*~

~~*~~*~~*~~*~~*~~*~~*~~*~~*~~*~~*~~*~~*~~*~~*~~*~~*
Just me

I'm just me
That's all I'll ever be.
I might not be glamorous or a big stun
But I don't change for anyone.
Prettiest, funniest, and most popular I might not be
But my true beauty is something you will always see
I don't try to be some one I'm not, my life is not a huge scam
Look deep inside me, to see who I really am
You don't have to like me, its up to you
Just don't discriminate me, no matter what you do
I'm not perfect, I'm no superstar
But to find the real me, you won't have to look far
Cuz I am who I am, I'm just me
And I am what I am, that's all I'll ever be

~~*~~*~~*~~*~~*~~*~~*~~*~~*~~*~~*~~*~~*~~*~~*~~*~~*

thanx again!!!


SuMdAy U'll CrY 4 mE bUt I wOn'T cRy 4 U, sUmDaY U'll MiSs Me LiKe I MiSsD U, SuMdAy Ull nEeD mE LiKe I nEeDed U, sUmDaY U'll lUv Me BuT I wOn'T LuV U

© Copyright 2001 Priscilla - All Rights Reserved
Elvenblood
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1 posted 2001-03-16 11:13 PM


Oh this is pretty good for a few minute effort! and I don't know you, but welcome back! lol

~Bryan

"Some men see things as they are and say why.
I dream things that never were and say why not." ~RFK

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2 posted 2001-03-16 11:16 PM


Welcome back!
I liked this a lot. Good seeing you here again!


I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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3 posted 2001-03-17 12:07 PM


Hey, nice to see you again!

Great poem! I didn't think it was poor at all.
~Allan

If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort


fozzyozzy
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since 2001-03-15
Posts 336
Lessburg Virginia
4 posted 2001-03-17 12:40 PM


"I am what I am, that's all I'll ever be"

Popeye would be proud

Seriously good poem. I wish I could stay within rhyme schemes like you do. Good for you to stick it to the people.

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5 posted 2001-03-17 04:01 PM


Welcome back! I liked the poem a lot. Great job!

--Marie

I never thought that you would ever be the one to let me down. I guess that just goes to show how wrong I always am.

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6 posted 2001-03-17 04:18 PM


WELCOME BACK!!!
nice to see you again Sweet
and your poem is actually amazing
id don't smell
thanks for coming back
hope to see more from you again

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

sweetstuff101
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since 2000-07-27
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OK, USA
7 posted 2001-03-18 02:02 PM


thanx so much to all of you who replied, it means a lot to me! THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!!! Lol have a nice day!!

Lotsa Luv,
~*~PRISCILLA~*~

SuMdAy U'll CrY 4 mE bUt I wOn'T cRy 4 U, sUmDaY U'll MiSs Me LiKe I MiSsD U, SuMdAy Ull nEeD mE LiKe I nEeDed U, sUmDaY U'll lUv Me BuT I wOn'T LuV U

sweetypie5
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MWC,OK,USA
8 posted 2001-03-18 03:42 PM


Okayzerz....it was a really good poem! I really wish you would stop making my poems smell like dog poo ! Stop it now!!!! It was a good poem, yu always rhyme really good1 I wish I could actually rhyme and let my feelings show like that! Well good job! Keep up the good work!

Love ya,


*~*~*Stephanie*~*~*

*~*In 3 words I can sum up everything about my life, It goes on*~*
*~*Of all the words of tounge or pen,the
saddest are those...it might have been*~

~sugarpie313~
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9 posted 2001-03-18 06:18 PM


i love this!! PLAIN AND SIMPLE

*Life can take your dreams and turn them upside down, Friends will talk about you when you're not around, but don't ever lose that light in your eyes*

Child of the Stars
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10 posted 2001-03-18 06:22 PM


YEAH!!!! Hi!!! Nice to see ya around again. Yer always good for a smile.
~Carly

"The eye sees a thing more clearly in dreams than the imagination awake."
- Leonardo da Vinci

Voiceless
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Under the stars upon the wind
11 posted 2001-03-18 10:20 PM


This was neat!
I liked it a whole bunch!


~*Peachy Be*~

anonymousfemale
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Limbo
12 posted 2001-03-19 12:23 PM


Great to see you posting again Sweet.

This one wasn't too bad. It'll be a good inspirational piece to the peeps who conform and constantly change themselves to fit into pathetic moulds.

Thanks for the read.

~AF~

"It is not necessary to change. Survival is not mandatory."
-W. Edwards Deming

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13 posted 2001-03-19 12:28 PM


Hey,

Welcome backm, I though this was good for a min. poem. Hope to see more of your work. Until then

-- Linc

"Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment."

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