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Machination
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fozzyozzy Member
since 2001-03-15
Posts 336Lessburg Virginia 
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Machination What makes your lips glisten Is it the same thing that makes Your voice pleasant to listen Is it the fragrance in the air Or your flowing brown hair? Why are you the first I'd approach To show you my thirst For a beautiful friend A friend that would never end What is flowing in your veins That makes you so wonderful And makes me so insane I must admit I worry You really don't want to hear my story How can you tell a story with your smiles How can I stand still With my heart racing miles I'm so sad when you cry Even if I don't know why Just smile at me Let me dream of what will be Me and my gorgeous fascination Always you the machination. |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Hey, I like this piece. The last few lines were well thought out. Keep up the good work. ~Allan If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
"Just smile at me Let me dream of what will be Me and my gorgeous fascination Always you the machination." This was a very good poem! I loved it... It's going straight to my library  Nicely done.--Marie I never thought that you would ever be the one to let me down. I guess that just goes to show how wrong I always am. |
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Elvenblood Member
since 2001-02-17
Posts 409Maine, USA |
Yeah I loved this too! It's so beautiful! Meant to be or not! "Some men see things as they are and say why. I dream things that never were and say why not." ~RFK |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Random question: Do you LIke the Smashing Pumpkins? Anyhow, nicely done on this one!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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fozzyozzy Member
since 2001-03-15
Posts 336Lessburg Virginia |
Yeah the Smashing Pumpkins are all right. Glad you like the poem. I just read it to 'her' on the phone. That was right before she gave me the "let's be friends" talk. Oh well. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I see the last lines caught everyone's eye, mine too.... beautiful expression of your feelings keep it up "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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