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Ricky
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since 2001-02-25
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West Virginia, USA

0 posted 2001-03-15 10:02 PM


I wanna go to the punk rock show
I don't care if you say no
Any other time but not today
So just step back out of my way

This is my favorite band
So come on and give me a hand
Help me get dressed out
I am so ready to scream and shout

So come on are you going with me
There's no time to drink that tea
Let's go see all the stars
Aw man, we don't have any cars


© Copyright 2001 Ricky - All Rights Reserved
Allan Riverwood
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1 posted 2001-03-16 09:57 AM


Haha... this was cute. Good job.
~Allan

If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort


TearsOfPearls
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2 posted 2001-03-16 02:09 PM


Hehe, I liked this one...no, loved it...just as much as punk

Planning big can be a gamble...I have already rolled the dice!

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The Backstreet Boy
3 posted 2001-03-16 02:28 PM


Hey,

This is a crasy poem it gave me a good laugh hope to see more "happy" poems and more of your work.

-- Linc

"Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment."

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4 posted 2001-03-16 02:58 PM


Heyyyy you stole the title from MXPX!!!!!Give it back!!! Haha. Nice song.
~Carly

"The eye sees a thing more clearly in dreams than the imagination awake."
- Leonardo da Vinci

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5 posted 2001-03-16 06:35 PM


Hey cute poem!



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Fading Away
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6 posted 2001-03-16 06:39 PM


haha.. that's a good one! Thanks for the laugh

--Marie

I never thought that you would ever be the one to let me down. I guess that just goes to show how wrong I always am.

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7 posted 2001-03-20 08:41 PM


not bad my friend, not bad at all

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

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