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princess^sarah
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0 posted 2001-04-03 02:36 AM


Sitting all alone
Nothing to do
Thinking only of him
The man I love
His eyes sparkle like
the shining sea at night
His lips, so soft
like a petal of a rose
His face, so handsome
It hurts to look
If only he were in my arms now
I would never let go
For he is the man I love
Who has captured my heart
It's fantasy that won't come true
We never spoke and
His eyes haven't met mine
But that won't stop my love for him
So now I'm all alone, all by myself
with only one thing on my mind!


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1 posted 2001-04-03 09:53 AM


   How depressing............*sigh* Chin up, chicky pie!
  ~Carly

Many miles behind my eyelashes, there always seems to be
the strangest things, the slightly sane, that only I can see...

Elvenblood
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2 posted 2001-04-03 03:17 PM


     Aww, it's sad, but go for him!  Go get what you want!

No angels in heaven nor demons below the sea, could ever dissever my soul from the soul of the beautiful Annabel Lee

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3 posted 2001-04-03 09:49 PM


This is really sad.. I hope things turn around.  Stay strong..
Good job.  I like this one.

--Marie

It's true that we don't know what we've got until we lose it, but it's also true that we don't know what we've been missing until it arrives.

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4 posted 2001-04-03 10:08 PM


Oh gosh, this is a really tough situation. It's so hard to admire someone you love from afar, and I can really relate. I hope you get this guy someday. Thanks for sharing.

"Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli

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5 posted 2001-04-03 11:12 PM


Like carly said.....keep that head up chikie pie....
I liked the poem, but it was sad.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Low Man's Lyric
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6 posted 2001-04-03 11:17 PM


That was sad and I hope the best for you.

"It is better to have loved and lost then to have never loved at all" ~Unknown

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7 posted 2001-04-16 07:11 PM


Have you ever thought of making the move?    Seems like he's worth it to you  

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee."  W.S.

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