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lilpoet Member
since 2000-12-30
Posts 55Dallas,Tx |
What do you do when You can't hold back tears? When you're scared and now You're face to face with your fears? What do you do when you have so much to say But so little time, When loving just seems like a crime? The hurt is staring you right in the face And you feel like you gotta Run from this place. All you want is someone to put Their arms around you If that special person only knew What do you do? What do you do when there's guns and hate? Unfortantly they control our fate When alcohol and drugs Are no longer cured with hugs? Peer pressure... It's too high you can't measure What do you when your friends are dying, When the whole world is crying? If they only knew... What do you do? What do you do when You can fight no more, When you've given up And closed the door? You're loosing yourself, Your only friend The tears have stopped And now comes the end... If you only knew What do you do?... *I wrote this because I've lost 5 friends to a car accident, and at school there are so many people doing drugs, then sometimes I loose control of myself. I want direct comments please.* ~If I had a star for everytime you made me smile, I'd be holding the entire midnight sky in my hands~ |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
What do you do? You stay strong and fight When you think you've lost strength, Get back up and fight Fight for your beliefs "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
never give up on yourself or stop believing in yourself or the people you love ¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Stay strong and keep that head up. Nice poem.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
You accept what has happened to you, but make changes to not let these things affect you again. Don't roll over and take it. It can do many terrible thing. Jon "Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Stay strong... And you have all of us here to talk to. I liked this poem. It's one of the best I've read from you. Keep it up. --Marie |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This was an amazing poem. I dont know how i'd be able to last through all of that so i give you major credit for remaining so stable. It's a hard thing to do and it takes a very strong person to get through such things. I admire you and your writing. Great job and im sorry to hear about the loss of your friends. |
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