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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV 
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Daniel, I know you’re up there now, I’m sorry you’re not still with me I miss you . . . I think of you almost daily, I think of the way I lost you I miss you . . . I still remember that day, I still remember every tear that fell I miss you . . . i dont know if i should cry because its over, or smile because it happened |
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Elvenblood Member
since 2001-02-17
Posts 409Maine, USA |
Tamma that's SOOOOOO sad!!! OMG, I'm gonna cry because of that. You did it so well... "Some men see things as they are and say why. I dream things that never were and say why not." ~RFK |
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Ricky Junior Member
since 2001-02-25
Posts 28West Virginia, USA |
Nice poem. |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Simple but so deep...so sad..so real. I like it a lot. I hope you find some peace. and in the end we still pretend the time we spend not knowing when we're finally free and you could be -NIN "The Wretched" Angel of Darkness |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
This made me almost cry...  Very simple, well done. It has a form to it that most of your work lacks. I liked how organized it was. Great job, and you can always talk to Uncle Allan.  See you around, kid. ~Allan If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Uncle Allan? Does he belong to NAMBLA? look it up if you don't know what nambla is. Anyway......nicely done here Tamma....quite sad.....  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Darn it Dopey... if you're going to introduce some weird organization or what-have-you... you might as well tell us what it is!!! Sheesh!! And the poem, Tamma, quite good... and I hope you feel better. Jenn "I'm a big, big, girl, in a big, big world, it's not a big, big thing if you leave me, but I do feel, that I will miss you much..." Emilia |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Sad poem Tamma Hope you're okay  "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
That is sad  But we're here for ya That's what a Family of Friends is for. I hope you feel better.--Marie I never thought that you would ever be the one to let me down. I guess that just goes to show how wrong I always am. |
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