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HappyPretender
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Prince George, VA

0 posted 2001-03-13 09:47 AM


He's really sweet
He treats me well
But why do I
Keep running back to hell
Back to the one
Who hurts me so much
Is it an excuse
Is it a reason
For being blind
So much in love
I don't want him
But I need him
To fill that hole
Buried deep in my heart
Once it's filled
I can go on
And stop living in hell
Once it's done
Over and well
I'll ask myself
What now?


<3~*Rachael*~<3
*we can't become what we need to be by remaining what we are*


© Copyright 2001 Rachael - All Rights Reserved
Allan Riverwood
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1 posted 2001-03-13 09:50 AM


Well this was also a very good poem. Hope you know that this is it for today, don't post four in a day or they all get locked up.
So arretez-vous!
~Allan

If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort



[This message has been edited by Allan Riverwood (edited 03-13-2001).]

Dopey Dope
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2 posted 2001-03-13 06:50 PM


I think you're just very attached to the guy. I do not doubt the love, but you are quite attached to him while being in love.
Anyway , i know how this feels. I am going through this as well.



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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3 posted 2001-03-16 07:46 PM


Maybe you like being hurt?
Though I highly doubt that....
Only you can answer the questions you've asked in this poem
Hope you find your happiness
and the right one for you



"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

Fading Away
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4 posted 2001-03-16 07:58 PM


Awesome poem. I like this a lot... Sometimes we can't explain why we do things. That's even hard to understand... well, keep your chin up.

--Marie

I never thought that you would ever be the one to let me down. I guess that just goes to show how wrong I always am.

Elvenblood
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since 2001-02-17
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5 posted 2001-03-16 07:58 PM


This is an incredible message. Many many people could learn from this, and it's a good example to set. Thanks for posting it! :-)

"Some men see things as they are and say why.
I dream things that never were and say why not." ~RFK

Irish Rose
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6 posted 2001-03-16 08:10 PM


We all have emptiness to fill and we are going to fill it one way or the other.
Most people stay with the familiar, afraid of improving their company and so they keep being hurt. It's important to move on to raise yourself higher, don't ever stop reaching for the stars. You 'll never hold one but the reaching is an exercise of the heart and will make you stronger.

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


Linc
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7 posted 2001-03-16 10:11 PM


Hey,
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What they said | this is really good keep up the good work.

-- Linc

"Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment."

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