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Tears of Glass Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 182Physically? VA.... Mentally? I'm not quite sure |
Why am I the way I am? Why do I feel the way I feel? Why can't life be the way I want it to be? Why can't I love the way I want to be loved? Why is it that, no matter how hard I try, I can never be the person I really want to be? Why do I have to make all these choices? Why can't I be somebody else - Anyone but who I am? Why do I do things to hurt people, When I truly don't want to hurt them? Why doesn't anyone care how I feel? Why does everything in life have to be so hard? Why can't I please anyone with anything that I do? Why do I feel the need to do more, When I know I've done enough? Why do I feel as if I am so alone, When I know that I am not? Another quick one. Not very good, so please don't be too harsh. *Jennifer "My nightmare isn't fearing what I dream... It's waking up, knowing what I'll see." [This message has been edited by Tears of Glass (edited 03-12-2001).] |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nicely done here. I think you summed up the whole answer in the end. Yer not alone and you know it. You just feel alone. People do care about you, at least *I* DO!!! MUA MUA MUA!!!!!! *hugs you* get well.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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shadowmere Junior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 11Ohio, USA |
Very well written. I think that many people can be surrounded with friends and family yet still have a part of their heart and or soul missing. It's a strange feeling hard to surpass. Good luck!  |
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Elvenblood Member
since 2001-02-17
Posts 409Maine, USA |
Wow, it seems like you're having trouble knowing who you really are. All I can recommend is turn inward, and seek your answers. Put yourself in challenges, give yourself theoretic choices (such as Allan witht he door challenge) and see whre your mind takes you. If nothing else, talk to someone about it, I always listen to people, and don't judge. Anyway, I hope things work out, and I hope things all turn out ok. "Some men see things as they are and say why. I dream things that never were and say why not." ~RFK |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Yes, this was a good job, but I have seen better from you. Sometimes spontanaety brings something new to poetry though... so keep writing at the spur of the moment. I particularily enjoyed the way you wrote it... all in questions. That got me trying to answer some of them... See you around. ~Allan If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
You have so many unanswered questions I see Let me answer one for you "Why can't I please anyone with anything that I do?" I think you're wrong on this one, cause I do love reading your posts. Doesn't that count as pleasing someone with what you do?  very strong poem keep sharing "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
I thought this one was really good! I think that a lotta people feel this way at one point or another in their life. Great job hun. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
People love you!! We love you!! The quick ones are usually the best because it's everything you have coming out in one hit. It's going into the library so I can look at these questions over and over and go BE ANSWERED DAMNIT!! ~AF~ "It is not necessary to change. Survival is not mandatory." |
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Linc
since 2001-03-07
Posts 552The Backstreet Boy |
YEAH, I LOVE YOU hehe Nice poem well worked. I would say nice poem and hope to see more of your work but since from what I hear you nolonger post I guess I wont... -- Linc "Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment." |
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