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Dont Worry Im here.
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Dont Worry Im here. |
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branden726 
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI 
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Dont worry I am here, Dont worry you have nothing to fear, As long as im around he cant hurt you no more, You have my shoulder to cry on and us as a cruch, Yes my Friend it has come to an end, No, not me and you, you and him, Not all good things last forever, They seldom do fail, Hey im here to lift your head up, When it falls to the ground, Nothing else matters as long as I can turn that frown upside down. NO! i didnt forget about u guys ive been on vacation but hey guess what this is beautyful isnt it?? i just flowed and had it in my mind it wasnt pre-written just how my feelings are for the moment. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
That must have been a really long vacation, we missed you. At least I did  Great message in your poem, nice job on it  "Be kind, for everyone you meet is fighting a hard battle" "Life's short. If you don't look around once in a while you might miss it." BothUnknown |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Nice to see you again.  This poem was quite good... as I have said before, you have a very definite and unique tone to your poetry. It's always a pleasure to read. ~Allan If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Is it me, or does the format of the poem look like a mushroom cloud from an exploding atomic bomb? erm..... anyway nicely done here branden! Good to know you didn't leave us again!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
It's you, Javier.  If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Glad you aren't leaving me, like some people around here are. My sane friends all seem to have dissappeared (and you were counted among them) and all the psychos (I'll list them: Dopey (sorry man, ya know I love ya!) were coming out of hiding (and Lakey) and all! Glad to have you back! Nice poem! I wish people would stop telling me that I can do anything I want to. I never thought that I couldn't. Life is what happens when you're making ot |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Nice to see you pop in again yes, the poem was really good thanks for the read keep sharing "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
I'm sorry I missed this the first time around! This poem was very good. Awesome job... very sweet. I liked it a lot. --Marie I never thought that you would ever be the one to let me down. I guess that just goes to show how wrong I always am. |
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Elvenblood Member
since 2001-02-17
Posts 409Maine, USA |
Hey, I love this! I can't think of anything really left to say, but keep posting! "Some men see things as they are and say why. I dream things that never were and say why not." ~RFK |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Ha Dopes you're right... only you would point that out, huh? lol This was a good poem, nice to see you back!! Jenn "I'm a big, big, girl, in a big, big world, it's not a big, big thing if you leave me, but I do feel, that I will miss you much..." Emilia |
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Linc
since 2001-03-07
Posts 552The Backstreet Boy |
Hey, I see it....its a cloud its not just you. Back to the poem great job and glad to have you back although this is the first poem I have read of yours I am still glad I got to read it. Hope to read more but until then -- Linc "Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment." |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
yes it is Beeeeeeeeuti~ful!!! I luv it!! You are sooooo good at this!! Keep up the awesome work, and keep writing!!! LoTsA LuV, ~*~PrIsCiLlA~*~ SuMdAy U'll CrY 4 mE bUt I wOn'T cRy 4 U, sUmDaY U'll MiSs Me LiKe I MiSsD U, SuMdAy Ull nEeD mE LiKe I nEeDed U, sUmDaY U'll lUv Me BuT I wOn'T LuV U |
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