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Jenn Cirrincione
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0 posted 2001-03-12 09:18 AM


I see it all,
With my own eyes.
The world's unfair,

Life is rough.

I wake up in the morning,
I dislike where I am,
In desperate need of a change.

Anywhere but here!

But if I could only see,
This unruly Earth,
Through your eyes.

Saw this day with your point of view.

Life can't be any worse?
Things are at rock bottom?
Just wake up and try to see...
Always another person,

With their own point of view.


"I'm a big, big, girl, in a big, big world, it's not a big, big thing if you leave me, but I do feel, that I will miss you much..." Emilia




[This message has been edited by Jenn Cirrincione (edited 03-12-2001).]

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keoni
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1 posted 2001-03-12 10:45 AM


Very good poem, and a cool message. I don't think it can always work like that though. When you get too wrapped up in your own depression, you could care less about how everyone else is feeling, at least for me, sometimes.
Jon

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2 posted 2001-03-12 01:52 PM


I know. I agree with you completely. But, I've posted a lot of negative poetry, and I figured I should tap into my uplifting side. Thank you for your reply.

Jenn


"I'm a big, big, girl, in a big, big world, it's not a big, big thing if you leave me, but I do feel, that I will miss you much..." Emilia



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3 posted 2001-03-12 02:16 PM


Nicely done here.
I'd same some lame comment like "In my point of view this poem rocked" or something like that...but i won't.....erm...ok



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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4 posted 2001-03-14 09:13 PM


You never know what you'll see thru otheres eyes
Very well written poem Jenn
Haven't seen you post much lately
hope to see more

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

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5 posted 2001-03-14 09:33 PM


Well done, Jenn. I thought this one was very nice.
~Allan

If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort


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