You smiled at me - - PLEASE READ THIS!!!

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You smiled at me - - PLEASE READ THIS!!!

Angel Bee
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since 2001-01-30

Posts 176
Virginia

0 posted 2001-03-11 09:24 PM

You *smiled* at me

I saw you from across the room
and I knew I had to meet you soon
you walked over and smiled at me
from then on my days were of happiness and glee

we started talking and after a while
we knew each of us would walk that extra mile
we wanted to be together, you and me
you were the only one, as far as I could see

after about a month we started going out
we were always together,out and about
it seemed as if this feeling of love would never end
but it did and who knew the emotions it would send

we broke up and went our seprate ways
and now we don't have each other to fill our days
I now hear what used to be our song
and it kills me, its been too long

you've moved on with your life and so have i
I no longer go to bed and cry
but maybe all the pain would of never happend you see,
if you hadn't of walked over and smiled at me

Hey everyone! This is a re-post of my first post. This is going to be PUBLISHED!!!!! I got a letter yesterday telling me, that it was going to be published in a book coming out this summer. I am also in the running for cash prizes. So I just thought I'd share that with you. Bye!

[This message has been edited by Angel Bee (edited 03-11-2001).]

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

1 posted 2001-03-11 09:42 PM

I knew i read this already

congratulations for being Published Angel Bee
I can see the reason why

thanks for sharing this again

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

Allan Riverwood

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since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

2 posted 2001-03-11 11:32 PM

Haha... cute. I'm also "published." Did you get a letter saying "You are published! Now buy the book for $50!" Kind of shows how these people get their money.

Well it takes a good poem to make its way to public paper. And it takes a great poet to write a great poem. Well done, love.
~Allan

If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-03-12 01:50 PM

I liked the poem

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