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Letter of revenge.
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Letter of revenge. |
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Marshalzu  
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking 
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Letter of Revenge. They loved me when they should not because they did I never knew I could I knew they never did I thought that they might love me and stand beside my side but that just couldn't be and now they turn and hide they think that this is justice but they are all just fools and I intend to bust this and stop them playing cool they keep on trying to hate me but they couldn't if they tried one day i'll set them free but by that day they'll have died. Friendship may end in love but love in friendship never. |
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Kandi Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 354North of Hell |
One of the more interesting pieces Ive read today...Im curious about the inspiration behind it. Have you ever gone all day w/out realizing u have ur shoes on the wrong feet? hate when that happens... Keep the poems comin'  "There is only one rain cloud in the sky, and it's raining on me. Somehow I'm not surprised." "Make your life like toilet paper - long and useful." [This message has been edited by Kandi (edited 03-11-2001).] |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Oh I thought this was great. Nicely done here!!! You are such a great poet....kinda filled with bitterness though. Anyhow, great job.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I see a big change in your writing. I too see that you are growing and getting better at it. keep it up. The poem was a wonderful read. "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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