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CLBinLOVE
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Hilton Head, SC, USA

0 posted 2001-03-10 09:41 PM


"i will always love you"
"you think so?"
"i know so."

because what we have is so true
because whatever i do i think of you
because of when we're together
because i know it's you

i want to spend my life with
i want to always be with
i want to love 'til i die
i dont want this to be a myth

i dont want to let you go
i dont want to watch you go
i dont want to ever lose you
i really wish i could show

how much i love you
how much i need you too
how much i care for you
how much i dont want to lose you

i love you baby
and i know so
CLB

© Copyright 2001 Craig Baker - All Rights Reserved
Isabel Galaxia
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1 posted 2001-03-10 10:09 PM


I'm gonna cry now!! I swear you can read my mind sometimes. Well I'm kinda speechless, and I'm trying to hold back tears, so I'm just gonna shut up now.
I love you

Bel
Wow I can't believe what you wrote..wow....

Dopey Dope
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2 posted 2001-03-10 10:36 PM


Hmmmmmm.......quite sweet hehe.
Looks like she loved it.
Mission accomplished.



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

CLBinLOVE
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3 posted 2001-03-10 10:57 PM


hehe yup thanks dopy

let the fighting words lie
let the candle light die
let the sun come up
let the same imply
~EvE 6


Lakewalker
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4 posted 2001-03-11 02:23 PM


I like this, it's done well, good poem

"Be kind, for everyone you meet is fighting a hard battle"
"Life's short. If you don't look around once in a while you might miss it."
BothUnknown


[This message has been edited by Lakewalker (edited 03-11-2001).]

ethel lahootie
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5 posted 2001-03-11 03:04 PM


THIS IS SOOOOO SWEET!!!!! i wish i had a guy like u!!!! good job! kt im jealous hehe ~kts friend jo~

"i remember running through the wet grass
falling a step behind
both of us never tiring
desperatly wanting"
~better than ezra...desperatly wanting

Marshalzu
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6 posted 2001-03-11 04:55 PM


This was really good, I really enjoyed reading it and i'm looking forward to reading somemore of your work.

Friendship may end in love but love in friendship never.

Kandi
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since 2000-06-14
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North of Hell
7 posted 2001-03-11 06:42 PM


At last: proof that good guys do exist! The male species no longer has an excuse!
In all seriousness, this was a great poem. I loved it. So did every other girl who read it. Trust me.


"There is only one rain cloud in the sky, and it's raining on me. Somehow I'm not surprised."
"Make your life like toilet paper - long and useful."

Isabel Galaxia
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8 posted 2001-03-12 10:33 PM


Just doing a little innocent bumping up here...
Ahem don't mind me!
Bel

Acies
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9 posted 2001-03-15 09:18 PM


I was gonna say the same thing
Her reaction shows what kind of poem this is
keep it up

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

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