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Crash&Burn
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0 posted 03-10-2001 01:23 PM       View Profile for Crash&Burn   Email Crash&Burn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Crash&Burn

Dust rises,
the view becomes difficult;
my mind filled with confusion.
I know not my dreams,
I live without existing.
What is to be proven in the world?
But I still live,
Questions fill my head;
I know not what to expect.

The dust settles,
my mind but finds one answer:
-I live for the purpose of living;
I feel at peace,
Words begin to flow around me;
My existence becomes clear.


Thanx for reading, now please express your thoughts about it.




I see the darkness coming all is bleak...
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1 posted 03-10-2001 02:01 PM       View Profile for TearsOfPearls   Email TearsOfPearls   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for TearsOfPearls

I liked it, intereting format and style, nice thought...keep it up.

Planning big can be a gamble...I have already rolled the dice!
Crash&Burn
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2 posted 03-10-2001 04:41 PM       View Profile for Crash&Burn   Email Crash&Burn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Crash&Burn

Thanx

I see the darkness coming all is bleak...
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3 posted 03-10-2001 10:49 PM       View Profile for Dopey Dope   Email Dopey Dope   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dopey Dope

Jorge, I thought it was ok. Not your best work but still.
Anyway you write well, still a lot of room for improvement and if you stick around here then you are bound to realize how great you can truly become.



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily
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4 posted 03-12-2001 08:21 PM       View Profile for Acies   Email Acies   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Acies

ah....the questions that surround us in this life
i see what you're going thru
thanks for the read
keep sharing

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.
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