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Wheelsgirl
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0 posted 2001-03-09 11:32 PM


A Speial Kind of Guy

How do you know when that specail someone really cares about you?
Is it when they say I love you?
Or is it when they make you smile.
How about when they say that they’ll do anything for you like, cross an
ocean, climb a mountain, or just look into your eyes and make you cry tears
of joy.

They hug you and squeeze you untill they can’t squeeze you anymore.
They help you become painless, to talk to you and to listen to your problems
and to help you through them.
And when the mood is just right they cradle your face in their hands and
give you a kiss that feels so good and so meaningful that there are no words
to describe it.

© Copyright 2001 Kelly Gambon - All Rights Reserved
Acies
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1 posted 2001-03-10 12:09 PM


very well written wheels
glad to see you've decided to post in here again
Put it this way, you'll know a guy really cares for you when the little things you do makes him happy to be with you.

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

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2 posted 2001-03-10 01:41 AM


Acire knows ALL about those little things....he's got one in his pants haha jk
anyway.....I liked this. I think you got the idea of when you know when a guy would truly feel as if he would do anything for you and the like. Anyway I think it's the little things, like acire pointed out, that count the most.......



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Elvenblood
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3 posted 2001-03-10 09:51 AM


Oh this is wonderful! It's going into my library! I'm in usch a good mood now!

"Some men see things as they are and say why.
I dream things that never were and say why not." ~RFK

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4 posted 2001-03-10 05:19 PM


Great poem, I can think of my someone special for this one... it's going straight in the libary.


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