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Elvenblood Member
since 2001-02-17
Posts 409Maine, USA 
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All right, I want Dani to see this! So Val, if you can, get her HERE! thanks enjoyt he poem too. Something’s wrong when we talk We talk as though there’s a block A block which makes me always balk Whenever time we clock This poem is, for the block, a hammer To break it down in a clamor And here now as I stammer A poem embraced, and written in Amor I know not why I cannot say all I want to though, but I will stall… But in this poem, I will scrawl A mountain of words, a message small On Saturday, our time has begun Closely sitting, people we’ve shun Even just sitting was lots of fun Can we not be two, and be a single one? Whenever I see you, you’re aglow Smiling bright I can’t forego I hope our hearts, as one will grow Just tell me back, and we will know Please don’t think these words too strong Because I know – that I’m not wrong I think that together is where we belong And now, the conclusion – to my heart’s song Know this – my attention, you always drew Then we talked, on icq, and I knew I hope, something real we pursue Let me help to care for you The way you make me feel is uncanny I dearly hope, you also feel it Dani "Some men see things as they are and say why. I dream things that never were and say why not." ~RFK [This message has been edited by Elvenblood (edited 03-09-2001).] |
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~sugarpie313~ Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 375Maine, USA |
Bryan, this one was a real tear jerker... even more so then any others because i know both you and the infamous "Danielle" hehehe  i hope your feelings of happiness carry over into many years to come and i wish everyone luck on whatever it is your pursuing!! Love, Valerie *Life can take your dreams and turn them upside down, Friends will talk about you when you're not around, but don't ever lose that light in your eyes* |
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Suga_Baby Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 380Maine, USA |
Hey Bryan! This is Sara B from school... Val told me it was you *L* I just wanted to say that this is SO CUTE!! Good luck!! I'm gonna go read the rest of your posts now! |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
wonderful show of sentiments hope things do work out for you thanks for the read "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well it looks like everybody from school is in on this one! Nicely done here.....lucky danielle.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Elvenblood Member
since 2001-02-17
Posts 409Maine, USA |
Hehe, YAY! thanks for replying to this! And support. And thank you Val! YAY I have a gf! WOOHOO!! I don't know why I reacted like that, but either way, I'm happier than ever! "Some men see things as they are and say why. I dream things that never were and say why not." ~RFK |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
This poem just made me sit back in awe for a few mins. It had a great deal of emotion and meaning within it and you made it really show through. It was great. Best of luck in all you do. ~ Amanda Destiny~ The law of harvest is to reap more than you sow.Sow a habit and you reap a character.Sow a character and you reap a destiny |
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