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A memory of Forgotten Dreams

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DancinQueen
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25 posted 03-14-2001 10:33 PM       View Profile for DancinQueen   Email DancinQueen   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for DancinQueen

you gonna tell me yet?

¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤
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26 posted 03-17-2001 06:12 PM       View Profile for Acies   Email Acies   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Acies

I might
If you promise not to tell

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

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27 posted 04-12-2001 11:50 PM       View Profile for Kandi   Email Kandi   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Kandi's Home Page   View IP for Kandi

Wow....I am so speechless right now....this was an AMAZING piece of writing! The detail and expression was perfect. I wish I could write so passionately and brilliantly. Another masterpiece  
~K~

"Don't spoons just make you smile? My friend is more of a FORK person, the butterknife makes me cry..." -Hallucinations in Blond

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28 posted 04-13-2001 10:56 AM       View Profile for Fading Away   Email Fading Away   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Fading Away

This is an amazing piece.  It's breathtaking.  I agree with Allan in that the way you used the pauses were brilliant.. Very beautiful job, acire.  This is the first time i really got to read your work, and I can't wait to read more.  Wonderful job!  This is another one that is going right in my library.

--Marie

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

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29 posted 04-13-2001 11:50 AM       View Profile for banburycross   Email banburycross   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for banburycross

I'm really glad that this poem got brought back up to the first page so i could get a chance to read it.  this is incredibly beautiful, the wording and flow of this piece is truly marvelous, i really liked it.  into the library it goes

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

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30 posted 04-13-2001 11:58 AM       View Profile for Jenn Cirrincione   Email Jenn Cirrincione   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jenn Cirrincione

I hardly ever get to read stuff by you. This was really wonderful. Keep writing more of them!!

Jenn

"I've come too close to happiness, to have it swept away,don't think I can take the pain, never fall again..." Janet

[This message has been edited by Jenn Cirrincione (edited 04-13-2001).]

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31 posted 04-24-2001 09:29 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Sigh,
still a beautiful poem Acire, this is going into my library.

Maree
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32 posted 04-24-2001 09:38 PM       View Profile for knightlyshadows   Email knightlyshadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for knightlyshadows

Good God
that was like wow
im adding this to my library
tiff

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"at the touch of love anyone becomes a poet"

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33 posted 04-27-2001 09:53 AM       View Profile for Acies   Email Acies   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Acies

Thanks guys

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee."  W.S.

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34 posted 04-30-2001 03:32 PM       View Profile for anonymous albert ?   Email anonymous albert ?   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for anonymous albert ?

*bump*page one

this is an awesome poem..
i really liked it..
everybody needs to see this
(even tho i think every1 already seen it )..anyways, cya!!


...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

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35 posted 05-16-2001 08:17 PM       View Profile for stace_co2003   Email stace_co2003   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit stace_co2003's Home Page   View IP for stace_co2003

it's really beautiful Acire. but why didyou have me go so far back? you need to get over writers block!!!  

*s*
Stace

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36 posted 05-29-2001 05:53 PM       View Profile for knightlyshadows   Email knightlyshadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for knightlyshadows

*bump*

“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

Just leave me alone and give me some space.

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37 posted 06-01-2001 12:02 AM       View Profile for cherish   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for cherish

hahaha...awwwwwww..look at the cute little teddy bear tuna salad boy... ..kidding kidding...
i really enjoyed this poem..and looks like half f pip did too.. ...


Reddened lips surrounded of passion’s untold
                  Magnificent crown’s lost in waves of seas
                  An essence...
                  aromatic wonder of redolent garden blossoms
                  What lustrous.....
                  timeless.....
                  flawless sheath of silk and gold

wow...how do you do it?..*gets a scalple and opens up acires brain*..nope nuthing in here to tell me..damn!...i loved the flow of the poem..it want to read it over and over and over again..hehehe...i love your format too..really original..and let me applude you alongside allan..*gives a one woman standing ovation*....bow graciously acire....you desreve it!....ugh..now if onlyi could have your brain....... ...good ob on this AGPFAGP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!




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it's short and compelling." -Javier Agosto-

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38 posted 06-01-2001 11:44 AM       View Profile for Acies   Email Acies   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Acies

Thanks for the compliment Cherish  

I'm so sorry for doubting you Kit ... please forgive me!!!!

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39 posted 06-07-2001 11:42 PM       View Profile for chasing rain   Email chasing rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for chasing rain

Acires, you sure have a way with vocab...I swear, you study the dictionary... lol
And it (the poem) flowed so nicely too. I really admire you work.   Over and out.

-Deejay Leah (i/j)

I heard a funny quote once...*scratches head* It went like this...
So, this guy walks into a bar...OW!!! :)

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40 posted 06-07-2001 11:50 PM       View Profile for DarkAngelOfTheStars   Email DarkAngelOfTheStars   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for DarkAngelOfTheStars

acire i loved it! you write very well *gives you a gold star*  good job!!  keep it up!

Dont knock on deaths door ...... ring the bell and run......he hates that

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41 posted 06-07-2001 11:55 PM       View Profile for Spice   Email Spice   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Spice's Home Page   View IP for Spice

Wow Acire.
You write absolutely beautifully.
I loved this.  
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42 posted 06-08-2001 08:17 AM       View Profile for Ina   Email Ina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ina

This was awesome work .

Regina

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To say these words to you"bon jovi

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43 posted 06-08-2001 10:37 AM       View Profile for PiXiEpUnKeR   Email PiXiEpUnKeR   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PiXiEpUnKeR

I've never read your work before! BUt I saw how many replies this poem has and when I read it, I said I  have to be one of those replies! The ending it fantastic! Great work! Thanks for coming back! Keep writing!   ~Dri
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44 posted 06-08-2001 05:14 PM       View Profile for Acies   Email Acies   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Acies

Thanks for the nice words  

hi Sweets, Lizzy, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Val, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Maree, Michel

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45 posted 06-22-2001 03:03 PM       View Profile for Alexia   Email Alexia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alexia

Acire That poem was great! I loved it.
Keep on writing good poems! Your a good poetry writer!

--Alexia  

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46 posted 06-22-2001 03:23 PM       View Profile for obscurity of cloud   Email obscurity of cloud   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for obscurity of cloud

wow, what can i say that hasn't been covered?  this is truly beautiful.  At first i was skeptical of your ellipsis, but it all seems to fit in well.  Excellent work.

"so when at times the mob is swayed to carry praise or blame too far, we may choose something like a star" --Frost

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47 posted 09-27-2001 07:01 PM       View Profile for Jenn Cirrincione   Email Jenn Cirrincione   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jenn Cirrincione

AWWWW this made me cry!!  
I liked it tho, it was sweet. Man, now I'm all sad!   Nice reading your work tho, bring us more!   (LOL- apparently I DID already read this   but it deserves two replies anyway   )

Jenn


"In the words of a broken heart, it's just emotion taking me over; you'll never see me fall apart, in the words of a broken heart."

[This message has been edited by Jenn Cirrincione (edited 09-27-2001).]

 
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