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starryeyed999
Junior Member

since 2001-03-05

Posts 35

0 posted 2001-03-07 10:19 PM

"I Know I'm Not"

I know I'm not a beauty,
Never have been and never shall be.
I know I'm not a genius,
never had the brains of the family.
I know I'm not quite talented in anything I do,
But one thing is for certain -
I'll never stop loving you

Isabel Galaxia
Senior Member

since 2000-06-18

Posts 733

1 posted 2001-03-07 10:22 PM

Hey, I really liked that!! It's kinda of putting yourself down...but...still...I liked that!! Good job

Bel

jeremydraul
Senior Member

since 2000-08-01

Posts 1118
State of Despair

2 posted 2001-03-07 10:26 PM

very very sweet for you to butcher yourself to express your love
how romantic....

JR

"War, what is it good for? Absolutely nothing!" - Edwin Starr

Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

3 posted 2001-03-08 11:38 AM

Hey, I liked this one. Had a good message.
Hope to see more of you in here.
~Allan

Stupidity makes the world go around...and people like us laugh. ~~Elizabeth, to Allan

Elvenblood
Member

since 2001-02-17

Posts 409
Maine, USA

4 posted 2001-03-09 06:22 AM

lol YAY!! I love it,a nd like Jeremy said, to lay yourself open like that is very romantic. I love it! Going into my library, and keep writing!

"Some men see things as they are and say why.
I dream things that never were and say why not." ~RFK

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

5 posted 2001-03-09 05:34 PM

This is sweet. I liked it......
Love is all that matters anyway.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Tears of Glass
Member

since 2000-12-04

Posts 182
Physically? VA.... Mentally? I'm not quite sure

6 posted 2001-03-09 05:36 PM

This is a very good poem! And I agree with Dopey_Dope, love IS all that matters. Nicely done.

*Jennifer

"My nightmare isn't fearing what I dream... It's waking up, knowing what I'll see."

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

7 posted 2001-03-09 11:32 PM

short but really sweet
You have captured the essence of love with such a short poem
well done

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

Angel in Flight
Member

since 2001-01-07

Posts 381

8 posted 2001-03-10 02:16 PM

This made me just say AWWWWWwwwwwwwWWWWWWW This is sooo sweet.. I "love" it!!

The law of harvest is to reap more than you sow.Sow a habit and you reap a character.Sow a character and you reap a destiny

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