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Isabel Galaxia
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0 posted 2001-03-07 09:50 PM



Secrets

Secrets hide
Problems,
Situations,
Secrets protect
Me from the world,
The world from me,
Secrets conceal
Emotions,
Fear,
Secrets mask
Insecurities,
Secrets add
Mystery,
uncertainty,
Secrets cause
interest,
confusion

- Here ya go Acire. Don't worry, it's not meant to be taken seriously here, just something I came up with. It sucks, but I'm too tired to care much. Thanks.

Bel

(Ooops can't spell )


"And you're my obsession
I love you to the bones
And Ana wrecks your life
Like an anorexia life"
- "Ana's Song", Silverchair


[This message has been edited by Isabel Galaxia (edited 03-07-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Isabel Galaxia - All Rights Reserved
Allan Riverwood
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1 posted 2001-03-07 10:02 PM


I'm a little lost on why you dedicated this to Acire but hey... if you say so, Bel.
Yeah, secrets are all that.
Methinks the "secret" in this poem is
in this part--
"Secrets protect
Me from the world,
The world from me"
Well this showed me the only real reference to yourself in the entire poem, the rest was spent defining secrets. Interesting...
Well this one thought had me for a minute. Be sure to whap me if I am completely off or anything.
I happened to like it. Short, sweet, an easy and worthwhile read.
~Allan

Stupidity makes the world go around...and people like us laugh. ~~Elizabeth, to Allan


Isabel Galaxia
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2 posted 2001-03-07 10:08 PM


Okay, Allan, I talked to Acire online today for the first time. He asked me why I was so secretive, so, out of boredom, I wrote this. Thanks, I'm glad you liked it .

Bel

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3 posted 2001-03-07 10:12 PM


heh cute
nice little poem you came up with, i enjoyed all you had to say!!

JR

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4 posted 2001-03-08 11:06 AM


thanks for the dedication Bel
I was shocked to see this dedication though
don't worry, the secrets didnt bother me
i have to respect your decisions of not talking about certain things...
that's what it's all about

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

shortilove_03
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5 posted 2001-03-08 12:46 PM


I liked this poem. It wasn't at all sucky to me. =)
Dopey Dope
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6 posted 2001-03-09 04:45 PM


Awwwwww it's for Acire...
nicely written.



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Lakewalker
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7 posted 2001-03-09 04:52 PM


Good job on this poem, it wasn't sucky.

"Be kind, for everyone you meet is fighting a hard battle"
"Life's short. If you don't look around once in a while you might miss it."
BothUnknown

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8 posted 2001-03-09 05:34 PM


This isn't a sucky piece at all. It's very good! Nicely done.

*Jennifer

"My nightmare isn't fearing what I dream... It's waking up, knowing what I'll see."

Isabel Galaxia
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9 posted 2001-03-09 08:47 PM


Acire- Shocked? Don't be shocked. Thank you much.
shortilove- Thank you
Dopey- Awww it was sweet aye? Gracias
Lakewalker- Thanks!!
Tears of Glass- Thank you, too!
Wow thank you all so much(getting repetitive huh?)

Bel

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10 posted 2001-03-10 11:50 AM


Very nice Bel. Acire should be quite happy with this piece.

~AF~

"To alcohol! The cause of - and solution to - all of life's problems!"
Homer Simpson

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