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I am greater than you.
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I am greater than you. |
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Marshalzu  
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking 
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I am < than you. I am greater than you, but then again that’s nothing new, I’m stronger than a thousand horses, more intelligent, sat more courses, more romantic than you could ever be, intellectual with my poetry, taller than the mountains, gentler than a nurse you won’t hear me scream, shout or curse I’m gentleman, noble I don’t prey on the weak you won’t ever find me if we play hide and seek I’m predator, prey and trophy to keep you won’t ever kill me, I won’t ever weep I’m greater than you, and you do not know it I’m the gentleman, hunter, playwright and poet. |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Haha... keep this for letters to distribute among your "favourite" teachers and classmates after you graduate. Sweet.  And the symbol for greater than is >, not <. Got your maths all confused, you did.  But this was a great poem. Rhyming "poet" with "know it?" Nice! I tried to rhyme with "poet" before, but ended up with something offensive.  Excellent work. ~Allan Stupidity makes the world go around...and people like us laugh. ~~Elizabeth, to Allan |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nicely done here. I thought this was outstanding. I'd show this to......well anybody who sucks. Great job on this one.....quite cocky, but hey.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
wonderful write marshalzu talking about pouring your heart out i applaud you "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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