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FallNTears
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0 posted 2001-03-07 02:44 PM


This one is kinda rough, wrote it in like 2 minutes.


You were always there
But how could I tell you.
I knew you would not believe it
You would say its only for attention
But do you really think I would want that to get around??
I know I shouldnt do it
But I feel like its the only thing I can do to keep myself in control
But you couldnt understand,
And you wouldnt listen,
So this is how it is...


*Me*

*Having a nightmare is nothing compared to living one.*

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Dopey Dope
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1 posted 2001-03-07 03:34 PM


Quite short....not as good as the others, but still a good read.


I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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2 posted 2001-03-07 03:45 PM


It is against the guidelines to post more than three threads in one day. Thank you.

"Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli

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