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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico 
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Reformist Plum: Down with forced learning, And blasphemy around! To hell with conformity, And the problems we mound! It's all so bleak, And without speech we're dumb. At least we always have A cold, good plum.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
Dopey: An interesting poem, if I might say so myself. Is the plumb symbolic of something? Natural things in a world so synthetic, perhaps? "If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh" -- Magus |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Some people don't even have a plum.  So be grateful. ~Allan Stupidity makes the world go around...and people like us laugh. ~~Elizabeth, to Allan |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
I really liked this one. Very intersting thoughts. Im still confused about the plum though. REgina |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
plum? gotta love'em... what an interesting poem.. very deep isnt it? I loved the title and theme, nice one bro! JR When my life dims to a perish, it will become a quote in itself... |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Very good but you make my brain hurt!  Bel |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
Good one here, dopey. rest assured fractal, with Dopey behind the pen, everything is symbolic!!  I think the plum represents all that is pure, clean, simple... unchanged by society. great work DopesJason [This message has been edited by IsGona (edited 03-07-2001).] |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Yes the plum is quite symbolic and Jason hit it right on the dot. Thanks for delving within the concept of it all guys. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
Awesome Dopey! I really liked this one. The plum threw me for a loop, but I understand it now. Jon "Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine |
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Tears of Glass Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 182Physically? VA.... Mentally? I'm not quite sure |
I really like this one! Interesting style, but very well done *Jennifer "My nightmare isn't fearing what I dream... It's waking up, knowing what I'll see." |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Berry nice, Javi. I knew what the plum stood for! Yep! That's right! I knew it! ..or not. Ok yeah. Sorry. I really liked the poem. ~Carly "The eye sees a thing more clearly in dreams than the imagination awake." - Leonardo da Vinci |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This poem is done well Dopey, nice job on it. "Be kind, for everyone you meet is fighting a hard battle" "Life's short. If you don't look around once in a while you might miss it." BothUnknown |
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Crash&Burn Member
since 2001-01-18
Posts 119 |
Very good poem, and you are right we must be proud of the little nature left in this dying planet. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
well done Dopey, well done keep sharing "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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