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Crash&Burn
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0 posted 03-06-2001 05:50 PM       View Profile for Crash&Burn   Email Crash&Burn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Crash&Burn

Shadow,
Born from the moon.
Twilight wanderer of the world;
Everlasting darkness
Pushes it's existance throughout the world
Never stopping for breath
Like life, which it's continous force
Expels all darkness from your being
Until it comes
Your time of death
When at last, the shadow will consume you.

I hoped you like it tell me your thoughts.....

© Copyright 2001 Crash&Burn - All Rights Reserved
Allan Riverwood
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1 posted 03-06-2001 05:56 PM       View Profile for Allan Riverwood   Email Allan Riverwood   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Allan Riverwood

Hah... a lovely summary of life.
Makes me fear death more than I used to. This is a scar that may never heal.
Thanks for the lasting impression. Be proud that your words can cut so deep.
~Allan

Stupidity makes the world go around...and people like us laugh. ~~Elizabeth, to Allan

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2 posted 03-06-2001 05:58 PM       View Profile for Dopey Dope   Email Dopey Dope   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dopey Dope

NIcely done Jorge......you da man.
I liked it.....you oughta come around here more.....me and felipe do.......so you should too, and if you don't then I'm not driving you to anymore parties!



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily
Crash&Burn
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3 posted 03-06-2001 06:03 PM       View Profile for Crash&Burn   Email Crash&Burn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Crash&Burn

thanx for the replies I'm glad you injoyed and yes dope I will try to come and post more often and DAM YOU, don't blackmail me cuase you will keep driving me! :-■
Ina
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4 posted 03-06-2001 06:26 PM       View Profile for Ina   Email Ina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ina

this was very good. Very scary. but good.
hope to see more.
Regina
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5 posted 03-06-2001 06:27 PM       View Profile for Lakewalker   Email Lakewalker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lakewalker

Ok you two, play nice Good job on this poem, the thoughts were expressed well.

"Be kind, for everyone you meet is fighting a hard battle"
"Life's short. If you don't look around once in a while you might miss it."
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6 posted 03-06-2001 06:33 PM       View Profile for Dopey Dope   Email Dopey Dope   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dopey Dope

Don't worry everybody......Jorge is a pal of mine from school. He's cool.....kinda odd and has a girlfriend who could be sent to jail if she passes 3rd base with him, but hey.....hahaha
YOu go boy!



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily
Crash&Burn
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7 posted 03-07-2001 06:49 PM       View Profile for Crash&Burn   Email Crash&Burn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Crash&Burn

I'm glad you guys liked it and sorry if it was scary the purpose is not to scare you thanx for posting.

I see the darkness coming all is bleaků
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8 posted 03-07-2001 06:59 PM       View Profile for Acies   Email Acies   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Acies

seems like Dopey has recruited more of his friends
that's really good
as of the poem, you guys in PR are really good writers
im very impressed

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.
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