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Crash&Burn
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since 2001-01-18

Posts 119

0 posted 2001-03-06 05:50 PM

Shadow,
Born from the moon.
Twilight wanderer of the world;
Everlasting darkness
Pushes it's existance throughout the world
Never stopping for breath
Like life, which it's continous force
Expels all darkness from your being
Until it comes
Your time of death
When at last, the shadow will consume you.

I hoped you like it tell me your thoughts.....

Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

1 posted 2001-03-06 05:56 PM

Hah... a lovely summary of life.
Makes me fear death more than I used to. This is a scar that may never heal.

Thanks for the lasting impression. Be proud that your words can cut so deep.
~Allan

Stupidity makes the world go around...and people like us laugh. ~~Elizabeth, to Allan

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2001-03-06 05:58 PM

NIcely done Jorge......you da man.
I liked it.....you oughta come around here more.....me and felipe do.......so you should too, and if you don't then I'm not driving you to anymore parties!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Crash&Burn
Member

since 2001-01-18

Posts 119

3 posted 2001-03-06 06:03 PM

thanx for the replies I'm glad you injoyed and yes dope I will try to come and post more often and DAM YOU, don't blackmail me cuase you will keep driving me! :-þ

Ina
Senior Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

4 posted 2001-03-06 06:26 PM

this was very good. Very scary. but good.
hope to see more.
Regina

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

5 posted 2001-03-06 06:27 PM

Ok you two, play nice

Good job on this poem, the thoughts were expressed well.

"Be kind, for everyone you meet is fighting a hard battle"
"Life's short. If you don't look around once in a while you might miss it."
BothUnknown

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

6 posted 2001-03-06 06:33 PM

Don't worry everybody......Jorge is a pal of mine from school. He's cool.....kinda odd and has a girlfriend who could be sent to jail if she passes 3rd base with him, but hey.....hahaha
YOu go boy!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Crash&Burn
Member

since 2001-01-18

Posts 119

7 posted 2001-03-07 06:49 PM

I'm glad you guys liked it and sorry if it was scary the purpose is not to scare you thanx for posting.

I see the darkness coming all is bleak…

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

8 posted 2001-03-07 06:59 PM

seems like Dopey has recruited more of his friends
that's really good
as of the poem, you guys in PR are really good writers
im very impressed

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

Crash&Burn
Member

since 2001-01-18

Posts 119

9 posted 2001-08-06 07:52 PM

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