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Ina
Senior Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

0 posted 2001-03-06 04:46 PM

A New person all dressed in white
stands my door,pushing it open
no more trust, and no more crys
for help
Too bad for you, her short dark hair
covers her eyes, an evil stare full of
anger and mistrust is placed upon you
Her anger coils tightly around your neck
squeezing all the betrayal and phony words
until there is nothing left but bones
A smooth, bitter laugh ripples the air
evil smiles and looks of utter contempt
plague your heart night and night
eating away at your core, bringing you
into the same empty void of pain
she lives in, a smooth tanned hand
reaches out and pushes you into her pain
making you feel the pain you caused her
A bitter laugh ripples the air
leaving you to soak in her misery

Regina

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

1 posted 2001-03-06 04:55 PM

This was pretty dark......i liked it though. Nicely done here Ina......yer quite good at that kind of poetry.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

2 posted 2001-03-06 05:54 PM

Oh my...
This is your best poem, Regina.
I can't say much more than that... very dark, excellent personifications and techniques...
Splendid! Absolutely amazing!
Obviously, going to the library.
Best poem on page one, IMHO.
~Allan

Stupidity makes the world go around...and people like us laugh. ~~Elizabeth, to Allan

Tears of Glass
Member

since 2000-12-04

Posts 182
Physically? VA.... Mentally? I'm not quite sure

3 posted 2001-03-07 03:17 PM

Very beautiful, Regina! One of your best.. I loved it. Keep it up.

*Jennifer

"My nightmare isn't fearing what I dream... It's waking up, knowing what I'll see."

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

4 posted 2001-03-07 08:06 PM

very dark indeed
what's troubling you hun?
If i can help at all, even as an ear,
you know just message me on icq
i'm usually on but invisible

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

5 posted 2001-03-08 07:09 PM

Acire, you should put some of us on your "visible" list.

Or don't we deserve it?

I'm putting this to page one. Regina is an amazing poet and this work of art should be seen by more people.

If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort

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