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DancinQueen
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0 posted 2001-03-06 02:32 PM


*I Am Who I Am*

Why is it that I never know what I want
and when I finally do
I'm always just a day late
you're gone with a piece of me with you

Some people say I'm stubborn
but they don't know how I feel
I think what I want and I am who I am
you can't change me so deal

You spend all your time
trying to turn me into you
When I can't just change
I can only feel the way I know how to

I'm sensitive and I worry
I analyze and I smile to much
I need to be held, yet sometimes
I cringe by your touch

I can't explain how I am
but if you cant except me
Then so sorry for you
It obviously wasn't meant to be


¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤

© Copyright 2001 Kiley - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-03-06 04:40 PM


Well geesh I guess you are going through some problems.......Acire's long time rival is really getting to you!!
I know acire will be there for you, and so will us, the people of PIP.
Hope you get better.



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Allan Riverwood
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2 posted 2001-03-06 05:47 PM


Hey, this piece kind of contradicts your other. In this one, you seem a bit more proud and esteemed than you do in the other.
These poems compliment one another nicely... you obviously are feeling quite a bit.
Keep your head high, Kiley.
~Allan

Stupidity makes the world go around...and people like us laugh. ~~Elizabeth, to Allan


Allan Riverwood
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3 posted 2001-03-06 09:56 PM


I think it's important to the message that these two poems are read together, so I'll try to keep this where the other is.
Beautiful poem, I might add!

Stupidity makes the world go around...and people like us laugh. ~~Elizabeth, to Allan


IsGona
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4 posted 2001-03-06 10:27 PM


"""
I am... Who I am
What you think, I don't give a damn
"""
Red Hot Chilli Peppers

I couldn't help but think of that song after reading your title.  I always liked those lyrics for what they are saying, and that stands true for this poem too.  I think you expressed a good attitude here.
Jason


[This message has been edited by IsGona (edited 03-06-2001).]

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5 posted 2001-03-07 06:53 PM


Dopey Dopey Dopey

~*shakes head*~

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

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