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Angel Bee
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0 posted 2001-03-05 09:09 PM


I will love you

I love you without knowing how, when or where
I love the way I know you'll always be there
I love you without any reason or rhyme
I want to be with you all the time
I will love you through the good times and the bad
I will love you when you are happy and when you are sad
I love you with a love so strong
I don't know how I could've been without you this long
My heart has almost felt the way before
And it scares me, what do we have in store?
Maybe this time the pain of the break up won't be so immense
Maybe this time the feelings are more intense
So this is what I know be to be so very true
No matter what happens I will love you


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1 posted 2001-03-05 09:39 PM


lovely..kinda reminds me of the poem from Patch Adams which is actually a poem from P. Neruda.

"I do not love you as if you were the salt-rose,
topaz or arrow of carnations that propagate fire.
I love you as certain dark things are loved,
secretly, between the shadow and the soul.

I love you as the plant that doesn't bloom
and carries hidden within itself the light of those flowers,
and thanks to your love, darkly in my body lives the dense fragrance that rises from the earth.

I love you without knowing how, or when, or from where,
I love you simply, without problems or pride
I love you in this way because I don't know any other way of loving but this, in which there is no I or you,

so intimate that your hand upon my chest is my hand,
so intimate that when I fall asleep it is your eyes that close."

beautiful aint it?
I think P. Neruda will be very proud of you
keep sharing


"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

Allan Riverwood
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2 posted 2001-03-05 09:51 PM


This is very sweet. I liked it tons.
~Allan

Stupidity makes the world go around...and people like us laugh. ~~Elizabeth, to Allan


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3 posted 2001-03-06 03:58 PM


Sweet poem!



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

keoni
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Up in the mountains in the NFC
4 posted 2001-03-06 04:14 PM


If this is for someone, they are a very lucky person. Nice poem!
Jon

"Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine

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