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Angel Bee
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0 posted 2001-03-05 07:46 PM


You're gone now

you're gone now
you hung on for so long
now we sing to you a sad song
we know though, you've gone onto somwhere better
there we know you no longer suffer
so strength is now something we must muster
we prayed and we prayed for you
but God had something else in store
so now we see you no more
know, though that you'll be missed
even those that did not know you
they will keep you in their heart in everything that they do

my friends cousin died of cancer sat. morning, and we'd all been praying for him, now he's gone on to somewhere better.

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Allan Riverwood
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1 posted 2001-03-05 07:55 PM


A lovely tribute. Keep him close to heart.
Poetry is an excellent commemorative method. Perhaps you should read this at the funeral?
Just a suggestion. Keep strong, Angel Bee. It's nice to see your faith is helping you through such a situation.
~Allan

Stupidity makes the world go around...and people like us laugh. ~~Elizabeth, to Allan


Jenn Cirrincione
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2 posted 2001-03-05 08:00 PM


Oh. This is very sad. Unfortunatly, it was your friend's cousin's time to go. I'm sure where he went to he feels no pain. Nice tribute to him.

jenn


"I'm a big, big, girl, in a big, big world, it's not a big, big thing if you leave me, but I do feel, that I will miss you much..." Emilia



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3 posted 2001-03-06 01:28 PM


beautiful tribute
he'll always be alive in everyone's heart
very touching Angel


"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

Ina
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4 posted 2001-03-06 03:05 PM


this was an amazing tribute. I know what your feeling my nono just died. All will be well.
Regina

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5 posted 2001-03-06 04:26 PM


Wonderful tribute......quite a sad occurrence...my condolences.



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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