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Another poem...no title
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starryeyed999 Junior Member
since 2001-03-05
Posts 35 |
Stick with me and you'll see How beautiful this world can be. Give it some time And you'll find That its not as bad as it seems. You can't give up You can't let go. Until you discover it all. <*Lacy*> "I can only please one person a day. Today is not your day. Tomorrow doesn't look good either. I'll get back to you. |
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Elvenblood Member
since 2001-02-17
Posts 409Maine, USA |
Ahh, simple one. Simplicity has a lot of meaning, but I think I liked the other one better. Anyway, keep posting! "Some men see things as they are and say why. I dream things that never were and say why not." ~RFK |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
This was very cute. A compact poem, with a great impact. I like these short pieces. Have you ever done senryu/haiku? They are worth a moment of your time.  See you around. ~Allan Stupidity makes the world go around...and people like us laugh. ~~Elizabeth, to Allan |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
simplicity always is beautiful direct to the point and very inspirational keep sharing starry thanks for the read "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
what the heck is acire doing with a little teddy bear icon? I think the moderating job has gotten to him!! Nicely done here! i liked the pome. Quite good!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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