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One Of Them |
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden 
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I know I've made some mistakes in my life, but I know loving you wasn't one of them. I know I've kept some things from you, but the truth about him wasn't one of them. I know I've hurt some people in my life, and if I hurt you, I didn't mean to. I know I've loved only one person in my life, and that person is definately you. I know I've made some mistakes, and I'm sorry if I hurt you with them. But the mistake they say was the biggest, wasn't one of them. They say I made a mistake by loving you, but that choice wasn't a mistake. And I know I let them to close sometimes, because that's all they'll take. I know I've said some weird things in my life, but saying hello wasn't one of them. Saying goodbye was the real mistake, and I wish it weren't one of them. okay, just me being weird again. I wish people would stop telling me that I can do anything I want to. I never thought that I couldn't. |
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CLBinLOVE Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 147Hilton Head, SC, USA |
wow i really liked this, it has a ring to it that i havent heard in a while, maybe its just because i havent been hangin around this site latly, *shrugs* but still i like it anyway. CLB let the fighting words lie let the candle light die let the sun come up let the same imply ~EvE 6 |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
You write well when you're "being wierd". Another wonderful poem allysa!!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Definitely never stop "being wierd."  Excellent job. ~Allan Stupidity makes the world go around...and people like us laugh. ~~Elizabeth, to Allan |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
ahh, see you all, I'm never weird. I'm normal, the world's weird, and they're just gonna havta adjust! thannks! I wish people would stop telling me that I can do anything I want to. I never thought that I couldn't. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
like Dopey said, you write real good when you're being weird So, what's going on know??? I think this Nitsuj guy is just problems for ya Keep me posted Asylla "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
He's not problems for me. Whatever made you think that? It's just that when other people tell me things that he's supposedly said to them. Then there's problems. But I don't listen to them anymore> I only listen to him. I am very weird, aren't I? I wish people would stop telling me that I can do anything I want to. I never thought that I couldn't. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
That's good to know just hoping he does lie to you bout things just to cover what he's said  "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
okay, I'm confused now/ I wish people would stop telling me that I can do anything I want to. I never thought that I couldn't. |
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FallNTears Junior Member
since 2001-03-05
Posts 20 |
Great job!! Loving someone is never a mistake, and saying goodbye isnt either unless its for the wrong reasons. Keep postng. *Me* *Having a nightmare is nothing compared to living one.* |
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