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branden726
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0 posted 2001-03-04 07:27 PM


What my heart says when im with you.


My heart says "Wow, can this be true?"
My heart says "Your the one!"
My heart says "I think I can start to unbend"
My heart says "You'll never leave"
My heart says "Could I be wrong?"
My heart says "Im having second thoughts"
My heart says "Five months...WOW!"
My heart says "Doubts I should have never had"
My heart says "Finally I can open up"
My heart says "I LOVE YOU"!!


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1 posted 2001-03-04 07:43 PM


Awwwwwww such a sweet poem branden.
Ok now i'm going to have to hurt you! haha.....where on earth have you been pal?!?! We've been missing you here.
Oh and the snowball......you betta watch yoself brotha!!!

Nice seeing ya back, and now you stay FOREVER!!!!!



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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2 posted 2001-03-04 07:58 PM


Yup, ditto what Dopes said. Cept the snowball part. I dont wanna be violent...hehe
FOREVER!!!!!!!!!!! and not a day less.
~Carly

"The eye sees a thing more clearly in dreams than the imagination awake."
- Leonardo da Vinci

Allan Riverwood
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3 posted 2001-03-04 09:14 PM


Haha... this was very cute.
I love the tone of your poetry, Branden. Can't wait to see more.
~Allan

Stupidity makes the world go around...and people like us laugh. ~~Elizabeth, to Allan


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4 posted 2001-03-04 09:39 PM


aww you're poems are always so sweet..great job

*dq


¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤

Isabel Galaxia
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5 posted 2001-03-04 09:45 PM


That is SOOO sweet. Dang....
Bel

branden726
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6 posted 2001-03-05 06:45 PM


hey guys im sorry ive been busy with school and everything and i have plenty of poems for you guys hey dope i am back FOREVER!!!

"i just love when you bring your whole crew because its just a bigger piece of cake for me to chew threw"



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7 posted 2001-03-05 08:09 PM


nice to see you back
you've been gone for a while
what a way to come back too
seems like you've swept the girls of their feet

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

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