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Raven Skye
Member

since 2001-03-03

Posts 112
.In a House.

0 posted 2001-03-04 06:54 PM

Forgetting

I swallow my pain
Pop it like pills
How does it help?
The emptiness it fills

Broken hearts & promises
With nothing to spare
I loved you so much
but you were never there.

I will overcome it
I will learn to smile
I'll learn to forget you
Just give me a while

You'll learn one day
To treat people right
All I can do is pray &
Hope that you might.

*×´¨`·.×*Raven Skye*×´¨`·.×*
There's nothing I want more to take than the only thing that they won't let me take... my life. ~Bel

branden726

Senior Member

since 2000-09-25

Posts 607
Bay City, MI

1 posted 2001-03-04 07:12 PM

Hi you dont know me but hey this poem is great. You know to be heart broken is bad really bad if you check my poems out in the old forums you'll know ive gone through a lot. Well hey this poem was great I love your sense of direction with this
~Branden~

Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

2 posted 2001-03-04 07:31 PM

This is a good poem. The sheme is very simple, and the message good.
Best of luck with the situation.
~Allan

Stupidity makes the world go around...and people like us laugh. ~~Elizabeth, to Allan

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-03-04 07:39 PM

This was great raven! I thought that it was written just wonderfully. Beautiful poem here.......nicely done.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

DancinQueen

Senior Member

since 2000-07-29

Posts 1092
Kokomo,IN,USA

4 posted 2001-03-04 09:50 PM

great poem just like the rest

keep it up

*dq

¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

5 posted 2001-03-05 04:22 PM

Wow..i really liked this one!! great job and keep em comin!

jeremydraul
Senior Member

since 2000-08-01

Posts 1118
State of Despair

6 posted 2001-03-06 10:05 AM

love to see new members with awesome poetry! this was no exception, great job bro!
"I swallow my pain
Pop it like pills
How does it help?
The emptiness it fills"

JR

When my life dims to a perish, it will become a quote in itself...

TearsOfPearls
Member

since 1999-09-23

Posts 322
Vereeniging, South-Africa

7 posted 2001-03-07 02:36 PM

This is a very nice poem, I loved it...very well written.

Keep it up

Planning big can be a gamble...I have already rolled the dice!

Tears of Glass
Member

since 2000-12-04

Posts 182
Physically? VA.... Mentally? I'm not quite sure

8 posted 2001-03-07 02:52 PM

Beautiful poem, Raven! Very simple, but meaningful... NICELY done

*Jennifer

"My nightmare isn't fearing what I dream... It's waking up, knowing what I'll see."

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