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Angel Bee Member
since 2001-01-30
Posts 176Virginia |
You're not here We're together, yet you're not here We've been going out for little less than a year You never call or ask me out Is this really what a realtionship is about? I want to call you, but I know its wrong I cry as I hear our song Why can't we communitcate any better I want to so bad and this is why I send this letter I want to be with you more than you can know And it kills me to hide and stay low So maybe, just maybe one day We'll find the words that are so right to say *~This has nothing to do with me, its for my best friend. As for me I just started going out with my boy hehe~* |
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branden726 
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
Hey great poem a little bit of advice if your going out with someone and u dont talk to them and u dont do nothing then hey whats the point? I bet theres some cheating going on there but hey just tell your friend it might be easier to look somehwere else and your really sweet about writting for you friends |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Good job. It's a tough situation to be in, being in a relationship where there really is no communication. Try to mend it, or just let it go. The choice is really yours. Best of luck with this, Angel Bee. ~Allan Stupidity makes the world go around...and people like us laugh. ~~Elizabeth, to Allan |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nicely done here. Quite sad! Loosing the ability to communicate with your significant other is a huge loss within a relationship. It's quite vital to sustain a healthy, long lasting relationship, and thus loosing it causes total chaos. Great post.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Angel Bee Member
since 2001-01-30
Posts 176Virginia |
Just remember, its about my friend, not about me you all! thanks! |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
If this is for your best friend then I say I hope everything with him/her works out for the best how ever that may be. Great poem writen here by the way. The law of harvest is to reap more than you sow.Sow a habit and you reap a character.Sow a character and you reap a destiny |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
communication is very important in any kind of relationship. Without this, it will surely not last. Thanks for the read "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Goshy... this brings back memories of middle school.... "will you go out with me?" then you hardly ever talk or anything... it's just a title. hehe But it's depressing when this happens in real life relationships. Good luck to your buddy... I say she talk to him, then if it doesn't get better, she should kick him out on his stupid butt. Nice poem. jenn "I'm a big, big, girl, in a big, big world, it's not a big, big thing if you leave me, but I do feel, that I will miss you much..." Emilia |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Yea this definately doesnt sound like a relationship that i'd wanna be in so i think your friend should really look at it an examine it. I really shouldnt be one to talk cuz everyone's said that about my relationship to lol...its a hard thing to do and i hope things get better with your friend and i hope everything is great w/u and ur boy!!! |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
eww sticky situation~ communication is actually like the first thing i look for in a guy. if he can't talk to me and communicate then he's outa there. but if this is your friend's situation help her out and tell her there's more fish in the sea that know how to talk  great poem*dq ¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤ |
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