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Teen Poetry #4

When I see you

Angel Bee
Member

since 2001-01-30

Posts 176
Virginia

0 posted 2001-03-04 12:22 PM

When I see you

I see your soul
Love is what your heart possesses
Out-streched arms is what you have when I fall
Very green eyes, that look out into the world
Ears that will listen to me
Your shoulder thats always there for me to cry on
Oustanding smile, thats always on your face
U are all that I need

Child of the Stars

Senior Member

since 2000-09-07

Posts 1658
Ann Arbor, MI

1 posted 2001-03-04 01:04 PM

Aww...you're all that I need....so sweet...gotta be one of the nicest phrases ever..hehe...great poem and keep postin.

~Carly

"The eye sees a thing more clearly in dreams than the imagination awake."
- Leonardo da Vinci

Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

2 posted 2001-03-04 01:23 PM

Almost didn't notice this was acrostic.

I'm glad that I did. You did a great job, every phrase was "awww" inspiring.

I'm loving your new work, Angel Bee. You really are improving.
~Allan

Stupidity makes the world go around...and people like us laugh. ~~Elizabeth, to Allan

[This message has been edited by Allan Riverwood (edited 03-04-2001).]

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-03-04 03:28 PM

Yet another wonderful acrostic here angelbee......keep it up. It was quite the sweet one.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

DancinQueen

Senior Member

since 2000-07-29

Posts 1092
Kokomo,IN,USA

4 posted 2001-03-04 04:40 PM

aww~! that was so cute. great job

*dq

¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

5 posted 2001-03-04 10:50 PM

beautiful acrostic poem
you have expressed your sentiments nicely
thanks for the read
keep sharing

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

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